A hard time fitting in (Roleplay :D first timer)

It was a cold afternoon,BrokenPaw quietly stalked across the territory as she went on a little hunting practice. Her mind was filled with thoughts,like would the clan accept her? Would they allow her to be a warrior? She was a rogue after all,and had a terrible past! All these thoughts made her pace faster and faster,deeper and deeper into the terrain. Her body quickly plotted on the ground,her ears up and eyes keen as she smelled a nearby rat. Not to mention,it was a fair size too. The rat slowly moved around the grass,not detecting the well hidden apprentice right in front of it. With a quick leap,she caught the rat in her paws and gave it a fierce bite it will never forget! She held it in her mighty jaws,standing proud as her height exceeded even her own breed standards. Her long,bushy tail swept the ground as it made a fog of dust from the dirt,padding away with her kill behind the smoke screen.

Dappleleaf watched Brokenpaw in awe. She was well hidden from Brokenclaw and her rat. Dappleleaf watched her sink her teeth into the rat. She knew that it wasn't good watching other clanmates hunt, she should have been hunting herself. But, she admired the apprentice's skill.

Blazespirit padded slowly out of the Skyclan camp. She lifted her jaws up to taste the air. Squirrel! She quickly but silentlyy crept up the tree, her moves fluent. Her powerful shoulders rippled smoothly under her pelt. She crept towards the squirrel on the branch. With one huge leap, she caught the squirre. It tried to run but Blazespirit circled it with her claws and bit down. The squirrel fell imp in her jaws. Blazespirit ruffled her pelt, and leaped down the tree with the squirrel in her jaws. Blazespirit's smooth black pelt shone in the sunlight as she dug a hole for the squirrel. She placed it in, covered it up again and bounded off to hunt more.

Hazelstar jumped down from the trees silently, and mews to Brokenpaw, "Good catch! You're learning quite well." Hazelstar smiled. This was her first apprentice, though she felt like she was doing very well. The young cat was learning quickly, and Hazelstar was proud. "Do you smell any other prey?" She asked softly, sitting next to Brokenpaw now. Wrapping her tail around her paws, she waits for a reply.

Dappleleaf ran off into hunting territory. Her body stiffened. A mouse was searching the forest floor. Well hidden, Dappleleaf did what she did best, stalking her prey. She carefully pawed closer and closer to the mouse. Now! Dappleleaf leaped and killed the mouse with one blow. Dappleleaf admiring her kill, buried the mouse and set off.

BrokenClaw lifted her head up to HazelStar. She always admired such a clan leader,her eyes shining with pride. As the question was asked,her head moved skyward as her jaw expanded slightly. She smelled for prey,but could only scent a dead squirrel. "No,none near." she told HazelStar,her usually deep and filled-with-pride tone.

Dappleleaf galloped back to camp with a mouthfull of prey.Dappleleaf savored the moment. It didn't take very long to get back to camp ; Dappleleaf was born to run.She dropped her fresh kill in the pile and went off to find her younger sister Sunpaw

Hazelstar bowed, smiling, "Shall we head to the training clearing then? A little tree work would be good for you."

Bramblesky padded up to Hazelstar," Excuse me Hazelstar, but may I speak with you for a moment?" Bramblesky asked," Or are you busy?" Bramblesky waited for her reply.

Hazelstar motioned that Brokenpaw should head on with out her, before turning to Bramblesky, "Now what is so important that you had to come all the way out here when you could have just asked the deputy?" She asked, sitting down and curling her tail around her paws. It better be important. I was training an apprentice, which is normally more important than clan drama.

BrokenClaw went to speak,until BrambleSky came into view. She kept her mouth shut and sat like a well mannered warrior. She would never speak,no not unless needed. She obeyed others well to,but was always secretive to herself.

"Sunpaw!!" Dappleleaf yowled. The she-cat searched all over camp. "Aw well, she probably is off training." Dappleleaf muttered. Dappleleaf settled down in the warrior's den gnawing on a bird.

Dappleleaf closed her eyes and let slumber take over. The rain poured down making the clan gloomy.

Brokenclaw was getting impatient,her paws shuffling under her. She decided to get up to her pads,rushing away. They can have they're little talk in privacy. Brokenclaw padded off into the bushes and back towards the camp. Her big figure squeezed through the entrance,her eyes fixing on Dappleleaf. She seemed to be the only cat that was alive. Brokenclaw let out a mew to her,walking to her. "Hi,Dappleleaf." she greeted.

Emeraldsky came out of the hole in the wall where he kept hos herbs muttering. "Merigold, Blackberries, marigold, blackberries..." he jumped into the scoop in the cliff that was the warriors den and saw Dappleleaf snoring in her nest. Emeraldsky shook his pelt lightly and let little droplets fly around. "Dappleleaf, wake up! I need some help! All of the apprentices are off training!" He kicked her with his front paw, he quickly regretted it when he realized that there was a concoction on his paw that was a mixture of mud and blackberry juice.

Dappleleaf woke up with mud and blackberries all over her. "Emraldsky?"she meweed. She shook her pelt. It was no use. The mud clung to her thin fur.

Emeraldsky didn't react to the small amount of mud that had managed to come out of Dappleleaf's pelt. "You didn't think I would let you sleep all day did you? I have work to do! And I need your help." He mewed longingly. He was aching from head to tail tip from trekking through the forest at night in search of much needed catmint.

Phoenixflare had been padding along until she saw Emeraldsky. "Emeralsky!" she called. "Is that Dappleleaft by your foot?"

Emeradlsky whipped his head around to meet the eyes of the black furred warrior, Pheonixflare. "Yes it is." He looked down into her yellow eyes. "Why?" He asked curiosly.

~Sorry if youre eyes aren't really yellow I was going off of your avatar XD~

Brokenpaw felt quite unwelcomed. She silently stalked away,her muscles bundled up as if she was prepared for a fight. Her thoughts now were the only friend she had.

Dappleleaf hung her head. "Sorry Emraldsky, what do you need help with?"she mewed.

"No need to frown Dappleleaf." Emeraldsky mewed. "I just need some help gathering blackberries." He mewed. "And most of the apprentices areout hunting or training, no will you come with me?" He asked the she-cat.

"Yep."Dappleleaf said eagerly. She was bored and wanted to do something.

~ My eyes are a dark amber.. so yeah, basically you're right ~

Phoenixflare shrugged. "I dunno. Can I come along with you guys? I'm deathly bored," she mewed.

Dappleleaf stood next to Phoenixflare. "What do we need to do?"she mewed eagerly. Finallyshe thought Work!