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Post by Birdstar December 24th 2012, 22:09

Hey guys! So this is kind of now my official place where I will start putting the History for future characters and basically short stories that I want to write! Also, I really wanted some more space on my character creation post thingy (Which is currently under construction!) so I could add a couple more things to that and basically make it more organized! Smile So onto the stories!


Birdflight's History
Before Birth
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Kit
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Apprentice
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Warrior
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Epilogue
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The Legend of Razorfrost
Before Birth
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Post by Frost December 24th 2012, 22:29

You should have paragraphing because its really hard to read like that. A whole block of text isn't exactly appealing. I'll read it when you've spaced out the whole thing :3
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Post by Windystorm December 24th 2012, 22:29

Wow. I don't think I could write that well or that long xD Cool, Bird.
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Post by Birdstar December 24th 2012, 23:25

Ok, just edited the entire story putting paragraphs in so hopefully it will be easier to read rather than huge blocks of text like Phantom said Wink
Hope things look neater! Smile
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Post by Lightclaw December 25th 2012, 09:57

Hey, I was wondering if you could or uh...wanted to do one with you and me? >.> just a suggestion! (: I really enjoyed reading this. I would love to co-write something with you. If you're interested, please PM me about it! :3
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Post by Nyx December 25th 2012, 12:41

Woah that must've taken forever to write App-Birdy. Razz It's awesome! Makes me want to write my own history too.

Hey if you guys do that, could I join? ^-^ I'm pretty bored these days and it'd be awesome to find something to do, like writing a story!
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Post by Birdstar December 25th 2012, 14:36

Awwh you guys are soo nice! Smile It took forever but it was definitely worth it!
I would love to write a story with both of you!! Very Happy It'd be so much fun! Omg we can open like a little shop or something owned by us three and we can make stories :3
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Post by Nyx December 25th 2012, 20:51

Awesomesauce idea! Razz We should haha. Short stories, if they give us a plot or something.
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Post by Caraway December 25th 2012, 22:17

Very detailed story, Bird Razz The epilogue is quite vague, though. A little elaboration on the cover up story for the kits and everything would be interesting. I'm curious o:

Maybe I can draw art for the story or a coverpage or something? Sweat Just a small thought.
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Post by Lightclaw December 26th 2012, 00:21

Awesome, guys! It's decided then. We shall be the best co-writing team ever! XDD
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Post by Frost December 26th 2012, 09:56

I scanned through your story briefly (hadn't got much time on wcf nowadays Razz) and thought it was great! Keep writing, you've inspired me to write my own history out too! If you need an editor, I wanna help write with you, Brightstar and Lighty too!
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