Bird RP

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Okay. I have to say I fail at roleplay titles.

This roleplay is based on a book called Ragtag. Here's the cover! (Don't bother clicking. It doesn't work.)

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Well, if you haven't read it, I'll give a brief explanation. I've also slightly modified the whole thing.

There are birds living in the city of Boston and they are called the Feathered Alliance. The Feathered Alliance are made up of swallows, bluejays, sparrows etc. They are led by the Council, which consist of three owls. However, they face a new threat in the middle of summer. The Talon Empire have left the forests where they belong because of humans and are planning to take over the city of Boston, including the Feathered Alliance. The Talon Empire consists of falcons, ospreys, hawks etc.

Joining Form:

Name:
Gender:
Description/Picture:
Bird Species:
Alliance:
Rank:
Other:

Ranks Available: Leader, Second-In-Command, Advisor, Member

My Characters

Name: Jay
Gender: Male
Description/Picture:

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Bird Species: Mockingbird
Alliance: Feathered Alliance
Rank: Member
Other: Has the ability to mimic any bird calls. Clever but not well-liked by many because of his tendency to play tricks on others.

Name: Fawkes
Gender: Female
Description/Picture:

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Bird Species: Snowy Owl
Alliance: Feathered Alliance
Rank: Council
Other: Youngest of the Council but daring and adventurous.

Name: Raptor
Gender: Male
Description/Picture:

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Bird Species: Kestrel
Alliance: Talon Empire
Rank: Second-In-Command
Other: Highly respected and feared by many. Unforgiving and vicious.


You may start once you've submitted your character!

~No one helped me at all... Can someone tell me what's happening in the Feathered Alliance?~

~I dunno...The Feathered Alliance so far is none of my concern...But I think they're worried about The Talon Empire attacking...~

~ Feathered Alliance are just having their normal lives while the Talon Empire are ready to attack the Feathered Alliance ~

"I'm in the five," Raptor injected briskly. "I'm not the second-in-command without a reason." Glancing at the others who were ready to take off, he screeched," Go go go! Follow me!"

He spreaded his wings and took off into the air, zooming ahead like a bullet. He stayed close to the ground, dodging trees swiftly as they flew across the forest.

~ I researched that Kestrels were birds that could hover in air for some time while many others types of birds could not. Kinda means that Raptor's good at fighting in air. ~

Talon followed closely, easily keeping up. The city loomed up ahead. "Find the council members!" Talon called to the other warriors. "Then the five attack and the rest defend the five!"

~ Sorry for the double post! It was unintentional and I just noticed it! Deleted! ~
~ Guess we'll speed up and go straight into attack mode ~

Raptor could see small flocks of sparrows about, their eyes filled with horror at the sight of the Talon Empire. "Just in time for breakfast," He let out a laugh, diving for a kill. He easily crushed them with his talons and strong beak and soon after, his belly was full from five or so sparrows. His talons and beak were stained with fresh blood but he didn't care about it.

Jay meanwhile watched the scene unfold in terror. "Grace, what should we do?" He asked, trying to keep his voice down. His heart pounded fast and hard beneath his feathers and he saw the birds of prey for the first time. "We can't let them see us, we'll be breakfast for sure!"

~Uh...What's going on in the Talon Alliance again? are they attacking?~