Falcon's Revenge
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Should this be made into an RP?
Falcon's Revenge
by Lightclaw November 3rd 2012, 21:22
Overall Plot Idea:
Omen:
Creed Ranking:
Allegiances:
Terms:
Creed Code:
Other: The Creed is the rogue group threatening ThunderClan..and the other Clans.
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- Spoiler:
- ThunderClan is on the brink of being compromised! The leader is on their last life, and a rouge is looking to avenge himself, and others like him, upon the Clan with the help of ThunderClan's medicine cat. At the same time disease is only just beginning to threaten ShadowClan while they only a young apprentice with a dead mentor as their medicine cat, who not only knows extremely little about being a medicine cat, but receives an omen from StarClan. Mean while, WindClan still looks to ThunderClan as their ally to appear strong in the eyes of the other clans, and RiverClan seems to be off in their own little world.
All friendships shall be tested, alliances shall be made, but who can say if they will turn out for the better... (Idea is mine, but a friend of mine with the user name of Hades on another site wrote this ;D)
Omen:
- Spoiler:
- ShadowClan thought they would get by easily if they avoided ThunderClan's rogue infestation. However, when their young medicine cat apprentice has a strange dream, an omen is discovered. The dream is of a thunderstorm with fierce lightning. The lightning strikes the water below the storm and penetrates the looming shadows to reveal a gruesome seen of dying cats, fighting, the eerie sight of blood, and the telltale sign of battle; dreadful screeches of pain, fury, and pure bloodlust. Suddenly, little Slatepaw hears a soft, pleading voice over the noise that says two of the most painful sounding words she has heard. "Help us.". Thunder rolls once more then the dream ends. Terror fills the little cat's whole being. Naturally, she reports it to her leader first. There is only one thing this could mean. If ShadowClan didn't help exterminate the rogues for good, they wouldn't stop at ThunderClan. Oh no. ShadowClan would be next. (Written by me
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Creed Ranking:
- Spoiler:
- Master- Leader and overall hierarchy of the Creed. None can defy him.
Assistant- The master's right-hand cat. Gives the orders if the master is unable. Next in line when the master dies.
Medic- the healer and care-giver of the Creed.
Medic Trainee- the next healer in line once the medic dies. Is chosen from birth and is taken to watch the ways of the medic once it is weaned from its mother's milk. Starts learning at the age of 6 moons.
Reapers- The punishment givers and most elite warriors of the Creed. The strongest cats aside from the Master and Assistant.
Trackers- the hunters of the Creed. They also track down the enimies of the Creed and bring them before the Reapers to be punished.
Soldiers- the warriors of the Creed and overall protectors. Often used as bodyguards for important cats or Prisoners.
Trainees- cats that start training for the position that was chosen for them at 6 moons and are ranked at 12 moons.
Nursers- The kit-bearers of the Creed. They raise the kits until they reach 6 moons.
Kittens- the babies of the Creed.
Slaves- The new cats of the group who yave yet to earn a rank. Basically, these cats are treated like dirt and are seen as unworthy until they prove themselves. They have to do anything they are told and are only above Prisoners.
Prisoners- Cats who have tresspassed or been caught by the Trackers.
Allegiances:
- Spoiler:
- The Creed:
- Spoiler:
- Master: Falcon- A short, bulky faded brown tabby tom with a large head, small ears, and round, owl-like golden eyes.
Assistant: Niko- A massive black tom with long, soft fur and hazel-green eyes.
Medic: Neva- A small white she-cat with black stripes and pale icy blue eyes.
Medic Trainee: Clifford- dark ginger tom with a twisted paw and blind white eyes.
Reapers: Akira- A long-legged ginger-brown she-cat with cold dark green eyes.
Cloud- A fluffy, muscular pale gray tom with gray eyes and large paws. (Panda’s brother)
Persephone- light tan she-cat with large amber eyes and a beautiful face.
Dante- dark tabby with calculating pale yellow eyes and strong shoulders. (Yin’s brother)
Trackers: Yin- black she-cat with bright yellow eyes. (Dante’s sister)
Panda- A fluffy black and white tom with broad shoulders and calm brown eyes. (Cloud’s brother)
Onyx- A slender gray she-cat with copper eyes.
Red- a small dark ginger tom with soft dark green eyes.(Forest’s brother)
Forest- a pale tan she-cat with green eyes. (Red’s sister)
Spider- A tall, long-legged solid dark brown tom with beady black eyes.
Soldiers: Ren- A long-haired white tom with dark golden eyes.
Rage- A bright ginger tom with an intimidating amber gaze and several scars. (Fury’s brother)
Bear- A bulky dark brown tabby with coarse fur and wild dark brown eyes.
Viper- A beautiful silver she-cat with odd dark purple eyes.
Fury- ginger tabby with pale amber eyes. (Rage’s brother)
Zila- calico she-cat with green-yellow eyes.
Lyric- black tom with a white belly and lazy gray eyes.
Trainees: Goliath- brown-gray tom with yellow eyes
Mentor- Bear
Calla- white and brown tabby she-cat with light brown eyes.
Mentor- Rage
Genesis- ginger and white tom with strange silver eyes. (Revelation’s brother)
Mentor- Lyric
Revelation- golden tom with strange silver eyes. (Genesis’s brother)
Mentor- Onyx
Titus- large, thickly muscled gray tabby with dark hazel eyes.
Mentor- Falcon.
Nursers: Styx- black and silver tabby with golden eyes. (Rage’s mate)
Pandora- white and gray she-cat with amber eyes. (Cloud’s mate)
Kittens : Chaos- calico she-cat with golden eyes (Styx and Rage’s kit)
Scorch- black and silver tom with burning amber eyes. (Styx and Rage’s kit)
Apocalypse- white she-cat with one gray eye and one amber eye. (Pandora and Cloud’s kit)
Storm- gray tom with stormy gray eyes and fluffy fur. (Pandora and Cloud’s kit)
Stone- dark gray and white tom with amber eyes. (Pandora and Cloud’s kit)
Slaves: Dawn- tortie she-cat with blind blue eyes.
Rain- pale gray tom with ominous charcoal gray eyes.
V- black and white tom with no eyes and many scars.
Prisoners: Dark- A russet tabby with dark blue eyes and a split personality.
Mouse- weak skinny brown she-cat with large ears and wide golden eyes. (Falcon’s sister)
ThunderClan:- Spoiler:
- Leader: Raccoonstar- A silver tabby tom with a fluffy ringed tail and black masked face like a raccoon. His eyes are a stunning turquoise and he has many scars.
Deputy: Fawndance- tan tabby she-cat with cinnamon brown eyes.
Medicine Cat:Shiverleaf- blue tom with yellow eyes and a shivering problem.
Medicine Cat Apprentice:Icepaw- white and gray she-cat with dark blue eyes.
Warriors: Foxleap- A dark ginger she-cat with a white tail tip and black paws. She has stunning forest green eyes.
Oakfang- rich brown tabby with green eyes.
Dappleshade- dark dappled she-cat with amber eyes.
Snowclaw- white tom with one black paw and green-blue eyes.
Redhawk- multicolored tabby tom with a red face and golden eyes.
Raggedscar- golden tom with a gnarly scar on his face and hazel eyes.
Shortswipe- dark tabby she-cat with dull amber eyes and short legs.
Apprentices: Geckopaw- fawn colored she-cat with green-yellow eyes. [Mentor-Foxleap]
Fastpaw- red and white tabby she-cat with blue eyes.[Mentor- Raggedscar]
Emberpaw- brown tabby with bronze eyes.[Mentor-Snowclaw]
Fieldpaw- ruddy brown tabby tom with violet-blue eyes. [mentor- Shortswipe]
Queens: Froststorm- lilac tabby she-cat with hazel eyes.
Kestrelstare- blue tabby with yellow-green eyes.
Kits: Aurorakit- silver fawn tabby tom with golden eyes. [Froststorm’s kit]
Dustkit- Lilac tabby she-cat with hazel eyes. [Froststorm’s kit]
Robinkit- blue tabby she-cat with green eyes. [Kestrelstare’s kit]
Elders: Beetlecry- dark fawn tom with green-yellow eyes.
Hawkprint- battle scarred golden tabby tom with gray-green eyes.
RiverClan:- Spoiler:
- Leader: Cricketstar- fawn tabby she-cat with bright green eyes.
Deputy: Willowfang- lilac tabby tom with grey eyes.
Medicine Cat: Russetstare- chocolate she-cat with forest green eyes.
Medicine Cat Apprentice: Morningpaw- ruddy brown tabby tom with yellow-green eyes.
Warriors: Drizzleclaw- blue she-cat with amber eyes.
Brawnspark- golden tabby tom with sea green eyes.
Claytooth- brown tabby tom with blue eyes.
Puddlestripe- light brown tabby tom with long legs and grey-blue eyes.
Lichenstrike- cinnamon and white she-cat with copper eyes.
Asphunter- diluted tortie she-cat with frog green eyes.
Apprentices: Lightpaw- pale blue tom with sea-green eyes. [Mentor- Claytooth]
Firepaw-red tabby she-cat with amber eyes. [Mentor- Lichenstrike]
Duckpaw- golden tabby she-cat with yellow eyes. [Mentor- Asphunter]
Queens: Echofleck- chocolate tabby and white she-cat with brown eyes.
Kits: Snakekit- ruddy brown tabby tom with hazel eyes.
Elders: Poplartheif- blue tom with hazy blind green eyes.
Oatstorm- brown tabby she-cat with aqua eyes.
Flickergaze- red tabby she-cat with cateract covered blue eyes.
Terms:
- Spoiler:
- Adder-mouth - to be sharp tongued.
Turtle-skulled- to be hard headed.
Bugger- to be a pest.
Baldies- humans
Flea-muncher- an insult
Rumblies- cars/ vehicles
Giants- dogs
Softies- kittypets
Frisks- Loners
Border-buggers- Clan-cats
Mug- muzzle
Released- being killed because you are of no use to the Creed.
DeathPath-road
Creed Code:
- Spoiler:
- 1. The Master's word is law. Any cat who goes against it is put to death by the Reapers.
2. Any contact friendly contact with the Clans or any Clan cats that are not allies is prohibited.
3. Once a cat is unable to do anything to benefit the Creed, they are sent to be released by the Reapers.
4. Trackers are not allowed to kill the cats they find.
5. The Master eats first. Then the Assistant, Medic, Medic Trainee, Nursers, and Reapers. The Trainees,Slaves, and Prisoners eat last.
6. No mercy is shown on a traitor or trespasser. They will be killed on sight or if caught by a Tracker, sent to the Master for judgement.
Other: The Creed is the rogue group threatening ThunderClan..and the other Clans.
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Re: Falcon's Revenge
by Thunderclaw November 3rd 2012, 22:09
So is this like a rp,or a story your writing?
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Re: Falcon's Revenge
by Sunbeam November 5th 2012, 00:58
You should make this into a roleplay. It would be awesome. 
Start writing soon! 
It would be awesome. Start writing soon! 
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Re: Falcon's Revenge
by Nyx November 5th 2012, 17:27
She did make this into a roleplay... It's called "The Ones."
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Re: Falcon's Revenge
by Lightclaw November 5th 2012, 17:29
UPDATED: I added The Creed and ThunderClan's Allegiances! I also made a poll. Please vote. ;D
No, that was something way different, Brighty. lol
No, that was something way different, Brighty. lol
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