Lunarlight

Name: Lunarlight
Gender: Male
Age: 22 moons
Appearance: Brown,and cream, with dark brown spots on tummy, and a striped tail.
Mate: Looking
Personality: smart, defensive, not afraid to say opinion, protective.
Strengths: fighting
Weaknesses: lazy, fat
Favourite Fresh-kill: mouse
History: When he was born, he was Riverkit, and then grew up to be Riversplash, in Shadowclan. Then he joined his mates clan, Earthclan, and then join Thunderclan, and is know a loaner. He lives in a den, east of Thunderclan, where he has a collection of rocks.
Pictures:
[url=https://servimg.com/view/17131521/13]
Relationship Chart

Spoiler:

Cool pictures Is that your actual cat (that you own)?
I'd suggest more detail on everything in general. The history is interesting though. You're the only cat I know who collects rocks

Great start I like your appearance and weaknesses And you have a rock collection That's creative.

Loner is spelled without the a I'd suggest elaborating on your history by adding family and such. You could make up siblings

Maplestream wrote:Cool pictures Is that your actual cat (that you own)?
I'd suggest more detail on everything in general. The history is interesting though. You're the only cat I know who collects rocks

Yes, hes my cat. Honestly, I think I should put them online.

Your cat looks so fluffy D; I have a friend who's obsessed with fat cats.

A rock collection seems very interesting and unique. I think you're the only member here who has one

I like it! To make it better add some more detail. And just a heads up, you left out an ' in mate's. Minor detail.

Phantom wrote:Your cat looks so fluffy D; I have a friend who's obsessed with fat cats.

A rock collection seems very interesting and unique. I think you're the only member here who has one

I'm going to apply him for the fat cats callender XD!