The random roleplay!

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OK!!!
let the randomness begin:
You make a character and follow the flow of the story! Assume there is no language barrier between the species ok? except humans cant understand the other animals, obviously! But other animaks can understand humans.


my character(s):


Name: Shadow
Gender: Female
Species:wolf
Alignment: Forest Pack
Appearance: black with piercing ice blue eyes
Personality: happy, bouncy, friendly, loyal, brave, good fighter
Other: lives in the forest, in a pack with Renyr

"Ooh ooh! I saw a large cave over that way! And it has a stream by it!" Shadow says, bouncing up and down. "Come on!" Shadow walks over to it. "Well what do you think?"

Starr laughed behind the bush. "Bravo. That was hilarious! You didn't even notice me!" she came out from behind the bush and meowed, "I'm Starr. Leader of the Broken Fangs. We travel a lot, and we're staying here for a while to rest."
~No god-modding, Cloudsong. ~

~what did I do? and is she talking to lily or the wolves?~

~You said that "They walked over to it.". That's god-modding. You can't roleplay someone elses character like that. :/ I would say, "Shadow walked over to it and waited for Renyr."~

~Please don't god-mod. God-modding means roleplaying someone else's character. You said "they" walked over.~

Renyr followed Shadow to the cave. She inspected it carefully. It was large and roomy, and dry, unlike the other dripping caves she'd seen. There were natural scoops in the not-too-hard ground, great for nests. From outside, it looked like a bunch of lichen covered boulders, the extension underground hiding the cave's true size. It was well camouflaged, with a mossy curtain concealing the cave's small entrance, which was just large enough for two wolves to get in side by side. "Great," Renyr commented. She explained what she observed to the black wolf. "And it's next to the river, providing a good source of food and water. Also there are many alcoves and caverns leading off from the main cave, for some privacy."

~srry about that! ~

"So then you like it, Renyr?" Without waiting for Renyr to answer she asked, "We should look for some more wolves, huh? Two isn't really enough for a pack is it?"

~please make your posts longer and more detailed ~

Renyr spun around at Shadow's coment, and saw the red fox coming out of the bushes. "Hey, I'm Renyr," she introduced herself. Normally, like that morning, she would be really mad with trespassers, but this fox had said she traveled. There was something about the fox that convinced Renyr she meant no harm. "Welcome. Shadow's right, of course, but I understand you're a traveler."

Shadow eagerly asked, "So how many foxes do you have with you? Are there a lot?" Shadow tried to contain her curiosity most of time, but she wasnt very good at it."Where are you traveling to?" she asked.

"Actually, I'm traveling to find more foxes. I only have one fox right now. I hope you don't mind if we stay in the forest for a while. We've traveled far." Starr sighed.

"I don't mind," Renyr said. "I know you're tired, so would you like to share our cave? If that's okay with Shadow, of course." The silver wolf glanced aside at Shadow.

Corr eyed the two wolves and the small red fox with a rather languid expression. What had the forest come to? Negotiating with cats? The large, steel-gray wolf shifted, ears tilting back. "Mmm," he muttered, narrowing his golden eyes. Coming to a decision, Corr rose swiftly to his paws with inherent grace, trotting down the slope toward the little gathering. Despit's his telltale dark gray fur, Corr managed to remain unnoticed as he paused two wolf-lengths from the nearest wolf. The wolves were both female, and one was injured. The fox was female as well. Huffing inaudibley, Corr cocked his head to one side, not caring if any of them saw him now.

Starr turned around. "We have a visitor." she rolled her eyes an turned around, "Have you seen any foxes lately?I would much appreciate it if I could talk to them. I don't know where Ember went."

Renyr's ears went up as she smelled another wolf. Her eyes narrowed, and she saw Corr standing in the shadows. Her heart pounded and she felt the strangest tug toward the gray wolf. A torrent of emotion tumbled through her, but she pushed those feelings down. "Who are you?" she asked.

~she likes him ~

~Well that's nice. ~

"Corruption," the wolf said briefly, his dark eyes sweeping the injured she-wolf. (He's gonna play passive. ) "But everyone calls me Corr." He lifted his nose and sniffed the air, making sure that no other wolf or predator was close by or hidden. Years of experience had taught him caution. Corr spotted a hawk circling high up in the sky, but there was nothing he could do about that. His hypnotizing golden eyes returned to the scarred wolf who had addressed him first. "Who are you?"

"Renyr." The she-wolf's blue eyes held that piercing golden stare. "I want to start a pack. Strength comes in numbers, and strength is needed to defend our territory." Her heart quickened again as she stated this last sentence, "And if you join my pack you can be alpha male."

A frown touched his face, the merest hint of hesitation and uncertainty. Corr held the stare, his gaze unwavering and steady. "That's an intriguing offer," he said at last in his rough-soft voice. "Something I would want to consider carefully." His ears angled to one side, giving him a rather insolent look. A rather cocky light entered his glittering eyes, sly and washing away some of his cold hardness that he portrayed a few moments before. "We'll see. I'll stay here for a couple days, and then I will make decision." Corr padded forward, the very epitome of a seasoned fighter and hunter, with his inherent grace and lean muscles.

"Okay," Renyr said. "Whatever you want." She padded forward toward the rock pile. "This is where we're living." As she reached up to pull the fresh green curtain aside, she felt something twist in her shoulder. As pain jabbed into her screaming mind, Renyr staggered and collapsed. The world went dark, and she knew no more.

Ember padded out from the bushes with a fish in her mouth. She put it down and said "Hey Starr, I caught us a-" she stopped as she saw the unconsious wolf. "What happened?" she asked suprised to see three wolves.

Corr's ears angled back in surprise as Renyr collapsed on the rock pile, her body slamming onto the unyielding surface of the stones, making him wince in sympathy. "Renyr?" In his lilting voice, it was prounced "Ren-ir," and the steel-gray wolf trotted forward. He nosed the limp body carefully, spotting the jagged wound on her shoulder almost immediately. Corr nosed it carefully, his warm breath whispering across the gaping wound. It probably runs through the muscles, and probably some nerves as well. Corr narrowed his eyes. He wasn't a healer; he was a fighter. He destructed, not created. There was no choice but to send for his sister. Now she was a healer.

Name: Atria
Gender: female
Species: wolf
Alignment: N/A
Appearance: silver-platinum she-wolf with alternating shadows of black and dark gray; slanted green-gold eyes
Other: A healer, not a fighter; the sister of Corr

"We're staying here for a while, Ember. With these wolves." Starr replied excitedly.

~ur new character is accepted brightstar~

Shadow sighed. "Seriously people? Where are all of you coming from? And you didn't ask MY name! It's Shadow, by the way. And foxes? Don't make too much of a mess on our territory ok?"

"Why would we?" Starr asked, "And it was because I didn't ask anyone's name." She looked at Ember. "This is Ember. My only recruit. So far." Starr sighed, "Are there any other foxes in this territioy I can speak with while we're here?"

Name: Snowflake
Gender: Female
Species: Arctic Wolf
Alignment: Lone Wolf; Travels with Feather.
Appearance: White wolf with icy blue eyes.
Other: Escaped from the zoo and found Feather laying on the ground. She took care of the little owlet and gave her the courage to fly. They've been traveling together ever since.

Name: Feather
Gender: Female
Species: Owl
Alignment: None; Travels with Snowflake.
Appearance: A white owl with one black feather on her forehead.
Other: As an owlet, Feather fell out of her nest and hadn't learned to fly back up. She was found by a large wolf called Snowflake. She was given the courage to fly by the snowy wolf. She's been traveling beside Snowflake ever since.

~accepted rockpaw! ~

Shadow sighed and said, "Actually, that remark was aimed at wolfie over there, and no, I don't think there are any foxes. We wouldn't let them stay right Ren-" She looked over at Renyr and stopped cold. Dashing over to her she asked, "Renyr! Are you ok?"

Corr tipped his head back and howled, the sound low and powerful, pitching to a sharp note that hung in the air. After a polite pause, there was an answering shriek, the cry of a hawk. Edeena circled again in the air before diving, folding her wings as she plummeted toward the ground. Snapping oven her wings at the last moment, her vertical fall changed to a steep dive as she slowed to land on a branch, her talons gouging the soft wood. The hawk cocked her head, yellow eyes blinking at the land-creatures, her eyes fixed on the Caller. Corr returned the stare for a moment, then said, "Atria. Find Atria the Healer." Edeena was gone before he finished speaking.