Flightfeathers!
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Flightfeathers!
Name: Flightfeathers (Flighty)
Gender: Male
Age: About 2 years old, Slightly older than his sister, Iceshard.
Mate: None
Kits: None
Description: Tall, muscular grey-brown tom with dark brown (Or black) stripes and a lighter streak on his muzzle. Flightfeathers has white paws, and a white tail tip. Flightfeathers also has white patches on his muzzle, and a ripped ear. Flightfeathers hasa dark pink nose with long crooked whiskers and light pink ear insides. Flightfeathers is taller and leaner than most warriors and he has long, hooked claws.
Personality: Calm, quiet, smart, always thinks before he leaps into battle. Flightfeathers always likes to keep his cool, and he always sets his sightes on the highest goal he can reach. He is protective of family and friends, and is caring and sweet to clan mates.
Clan: N/A
Rank: N/A
History: Coming as soon as something happens.
Hope you like it so far! Iceshard, my older sister will be helping me more with this! :3
Gender: Male
Age: About 2 years old, Slightly older than his sister, Iceshard.
Mate: None
Kits: None
Description: Tall, muscular grey-brown tom with dark brown (Or black) stripes and a lighter streak on his muzzle. Flightfeathers has white paws, and a white tail tip. Flightfeathers also has white patches on his muzzle, and a ripped ear. Flightfeathers hasa dark pink nose with long crooked whiskers and light pink ear insides. Flightfeathers is taller and leaner than most warriors and he has long, hooked claws.
Personality: Calm, quiet, smart, always thinks before he leaps into battle. Flightfeathers always likes to keep his cool, and he always sets his sightes on the highest goal he can reach. He is protective of family and friends, and is caring and sweet to clan mates.
Clan: N/A
Rank: N/A
History: Coming as soon as something happens.
Hope you like it so far! Iceshard, my older sister will be helping me more with this! :3
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Re: Flightfeathers!
Good job! I love it so far. <3 Oh by the way your avatar is ADORABLE. :3
Legendflower- Loner
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Re: Flightfeathers!
Great character sheet Flighty! Cant wait to see more
Birdstar- WindClan Warrior
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Re: Flightfeathers!
Nice description c:
Very nice to meet you, Flightfeathers!
Very nice to meet you, Flightfeathers!
Pinewhisker- RiverClan Warrior
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Re: Flightfeathers!
Awesome job so far! I can't wait for the history.
Roguestar- ThunderClan Leader
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Re: Flightfeathers!
Looks good so far Just a writing trick though: In your description, almost every sentence starts with "Flightfeathers.....so on". You should mix up pronouns a little. Use "he" for some sentences. It will flow more
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Re: Flightfeathers!
Cool! Though it looks like it's a peachyish color.
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