New Sorrelstar Character Profile
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New Sorrelstar Character Profile
Name
Sorrelstar
Gender
Female
Clan
Shadow
Rank
Leader
Description
Sorrelstar is a shortish coffee-colored she-cat. Her semi-long coat is cluttered with dark, dusty brown stripes and her face has a few spots on it of the same color. Her tail is very thick at the end and has a long stripe on it that thins out near the end. Her eyes are darkish olive green, with hazel around the edges. Her nose is dark grey and her toes are pale creamy tan.
Personality
Stubborn, outspoken, independent, and always stands up for what she thinks is right.
History
Only child of Snailfur and Stormheart, Sorrelkit never had siblings to play with. She spent most of her time with her orphaned cousin, Sprucepaw/claw. She became an apprentice soon after he became a warrior. Sadly, she did not get him as a mentor, probably because the leader though he would go soft on her, being a relative. Instead she got Swiftberry as her mentor and trained often with Blackpaw, an apprentice a bit older than her and her mentor. They became great friends. But they spent less and less time together as the medicine cat, Sunnyspots, asked her to help him more and more.
One day, Snailfur and Stormheart went on a patrol to get rid of a fox in the territory. Stormheart came back dead and Snailfur ran off. For months, no one had seen her mother and suspected that she was dead. That full moon she went to her second gathering. Sorrelpaw met a young apprentice named Violetpaw. They became instant friends, even better friends than Blackpaw and Sorrelpaw had been. After that, they met up every few nights to hang out. Blackpaw began to smell the WindClan apprentice on her fur and became jealous.
Before becoming a warrior, Sunnyspots revealed the true reason of the visits. He told Sorrelpaw that the deputy was going to kill her. Enraged, Sorrelpaw asked Sunnyspots what she should do. The medicine told her to kill him before he killed her. Sorrelpaw then surprised Greyfang by the river and drowned him, hiding the body far away from clan territories. She became a warrior soon after and was named Sorrelsoul. Blackpaw became Blackswan.
The new warrior was walking out in the swamp one day when a fire swept through the territory. The rest of the clan had made it out but Blackswan had cornered Sorrelsoul in the flames. She told the creamy she cat what she knew and that she had suggested her warrior name, so she would remember her 'dirty' soul. They fought and rolled into the ShadoeClan tunnels somehow.
Though safe from the fire, Sorrelsoul was now in danger of Blackswan's claws. The warriots tumbled into the river cave and Sorrelsoul slipped on the bank. She slipped into the river but managed to cling to the edge of the bank with her front paws. Blackswan slowly pushed her off, one paw at a time. Just as Sorrelsoul's last paw was pushed off, she grabbed Blackswan's neck and brought the black-and-white she cat down with her.
The were thrown out into the lake, where Sorrelsoul tried to resurface. But Blackswan's shaking paw reached out for her leg and pulled her down. She kicked frantically and successfully kicked her off, though she had knocked out her crazed friend. Sorrelsoul reluctantly left Blackswan to drown and paddled to the surface. The tan she cat swam towards the closest shore with difficulty. As soon as she felt pebbles beneath her paws, she collapsed into the water and let the waves push her onto shore.
She was found by a hunting patrol and was brought back to camp.
Other Info
-Devon Rex/Munchkin mix
-Slowish
-Sturdy
-4 [human] years old
Sorrelstar
Gender
Female
Clan
Shadow
Rank
Leader
Description
Sorrelstar is a shortish coffee-colored she-cat. Her semi-long coat is cluttered with dark, dusty brown stripes and her face has a few spots on it of the same color. Her tail is very thick at the end and has a long stripe on it that thins out near the end. Her eyes are darkish olive green, with hazel around the edges. Her nose is dark grey and her toes are pale creamy tan.
Personality
Stubborn, outspoken, independent, and always stands up for what she thinks is right.
History
Only child of Snailfur and Stormheart, Sorrelkit never had siblings to play with. She spent most of her time with her orphaned cousin, Sprucepaw/claw. She became an apprentice soon after he became a warrior. Sadly, she did not get him as a mentor, probably because the leader though he would go soft on her, being a relative. Instead she got Swiftberry as her mentor and trained often with Blackpaw, an apprentice a bit older than her and her mentor. They became great friends. But they spent less and less time together as the medicine cat, Sunnyspots, asked her to help him more and more.
One day, Snailfur and Stormheart went on a patrol to get rid of a fox in the territory. Stormheart came back dead and Snailfur ran off. For months, no one had seen her mother and suspected that she was dead. That full moon she went to her second gathering. Sorrelpaw met a young apprentice named Violetpaw. They became instant friends, even better friends than Blackpaw and Sorrelpaw had been. After that, they met up every few nights to hang out. Blackpaw began to smell the WindClan apprentice on her fur and became jealous.
Before becoming a warrior, Sunnyspots revealed the true reason of the visits. He told Sorrelpaw that the deputy was going to kill her. Enraged, Sorrelpaw asked Sunnyspots what she should do. The medicine told her to kill him before he killed her. Sorrelpaw then surprised Greyfang by the river and drowned him, hiding the body far away from clan territories. She became a warrior soon after and was named Sorrelsoul. Blackpaw became Blackswan.
The new warrior was walking out in the swamp one day when a fire swept through the territory. The rest of the clan had made it out but Blackswan had cornered Sorrelsoul in the flames. She told the creamy she cat what she knew and that she had suggested her warrior name, so she would remember her 'dirty' soul. They fought and rolled into the ShadoeClan tunnels somehow.
Though safe from the fire, Sorrelsoul was now in danger of Blackswan's claws. The warriots tumbled into the river cave and Sorrelsoul slipped on the bank. She slipped into the river but managed to cling to the edge of the bank with her front paws. Blackswan slowly pushed her off, one paw at a time. Just as Sorrelsoul's last paw was pushed off, she grabbed Blackswan's neck and brought the black-and-white she cat down with her.
The were thrown out into the lake, where Sorrelsoul tried to resurface. But Blackswan's shaking paw reached out for her leg and pulled her down. She kicked frantically and successfully kicked her off, though she had knocked out her crazed friend. Sorrelsoul reluctantly left Blackswan to drown and paddled to the surface. The tan she cat swam towards the closest shore with difficulty. As soon as she felt pebbles beneath her paws, she collapsed into the water and let the waves push her onto shore.
She was found by a hunting patrol and was brought back to camp.
Other Info
-Devon Rex/Munchkin mix
-Slowish
-Sturdy
-4 [human] years old
Last edited by Sorrelstar on April 13th 2013, 16:03; edited 8 times in total
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Re: New Sorrelstar Character Profile
This is nice, will you add a history and pictures?
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Re: New Sorrelstar Character Profile
Yep. C: I'm working on some pictures and refining the history or whatever right now.
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It's been updated c: Added a history and changed her color :I IDK why...
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Re: New Sorrelstar Character Profile
Nice history! I like it. ^-^ Blackswan is very evil....
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Re: New Sorrelstar Character Profile
I love it! But I really hate Blackswan now. She really had no reason t be jealous, after all she did get to see Sorrel more often, right?
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Thanks guys c:
Yes, Maple, she didn't have a reason. But Blackswan is a butthead and has no sense.
Yes, Maple, she didn't have a reason. But Blackswan is a butthead and has no sense.
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