Poem of Shadowclan

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Ferce and powerfull,
one with the the night,
ferceness is full,
to see one is a sight,
they are one with the night.
Cold hearts, warm blood,
there hits make quit a thud,
They won't use twolegs fryingpans,
they are not your buds,
there name is shadowclan.
-Silverstream3655

Here we go!!
Roses might be red
Violets are almost never blue
I am a cat
and so are you!
But seriously!!
VIolets have to be purple!!

The sky is turns dark
in shades of stormy grey
no longer a rosy-golden arc
or a rich purple bouquet.

Angry clouds gather
ready to release their load
rain to cleanse without lather
thunder rumbles like an onimous ode.

Rain blasts through my window
propped open 'cos of the damn heat
how was I ever to know
that water would flow in like a sheet?

Here I am, soaking wet
Marveling at nature's power
paying it's long-kept debt
and reviving many a dying flower.

--I dunno. It suddenly started to rain so yeah.--

Haha, nice.
I finally hit inspirtaion! I deleted the 1st stanza, though.

Shadowclan are ninjas
In the silent night
We sneak up on people and they
DOnt even give us a good fight

Icestar is leader
No one can beat 'er
Our deputy is Shadowstorm
THis clan is hardly the norm

Whitefire and Crystaldance can heal
Thank StarClan none of our cat's pelts are teal!

StarClan guides us through the forest
A normal day is hardly boring!

i think i will start a topic for poems....called Cheesefur's poems but you guys can include yours too. no freestyle poems please!b just rhyming ones.

Thats a good idea!!! Can we write raps, too?

Bananas, Bananas.
I know alot of Annas.
Do you like to read?
Reading is my nead.
Somting somthing somthing,
My doorbell gos ring a ding ding!

Silently dreaming,
Evil minds scheming,
The mind is mysterious,
The Sleep so luxerious.

Cool!!!

silverstream3655 wrote:Bananas, Bananas.
I know alot of Annas.
Do you like to read?
Reading is my nead.
Somting somthing somthing,
My doorbell gos ring a ding ding!

sounds like darkfire

Sadly, true.

Hm...

Stalking through the forest
A hunter tracking prey
The trees are at their stillest
Not a rustle through the day.

Only one sound,
A terrified squeak,
Limp flesh hits the ground
The strong killed the weak.

Returning home with food
For the young to eat
In the shadows prey elude
Glad the hunter they not meet.

Ooooh!

Ozone wrote:

silverstream3655 wrote:Bananas, Bananas.
I know alot of Annas.
Do you like to read?
Reading is my nead.
Somting somthing somthing,
My doorbell gos ring a ding ding!

sounds like darkfire

but Ozone, darkfire would write "I like a lot of Annas"
nice long poem tawnypelt. and yeah you can rap Iceclover. i like assorted stuff.

Boom shaka laka! (idk)
DId any one ever notice that there isnt any ryming in the song 'Friday by Rebecka Black?' Not even in the rapping!

No???

It doesnt have any ryming. AT ALL! EVEN THE RAPPS! RAPPS ARE SURPOSED TO RYME!

Okay... I'm not an expert at raps... don't blame me??? And yes, everyone, after this, I will stop spamming.

*GASP* REALLLLLLLY? Thats surprising! Maybe i will resend u a friend request...

Um... Raps arent supposed to rhyme.... Thats the part of freestyle expressing yourself.
ShadowClan!ShadowClan!
I dont know. I cant write raps, just rap them.

it's kind of like free style poems. they don't have to rhyme, they're just a bunch of sentences put one under the other to look like a poem. there's a type of poem called the "epic" poem. it's actually one.

Poems...... They're cool

Yeah. My teacher has a lot of poem books in the classroom.

WAAHH! but no one posts poems anymore. the topic has been abandoned~ i think. the last time someone posted on it was me on june 16th.

In my year book at school i signed year books you know how there is a book crack i said cows moo ducks quack I'm the first one to sign your crack how is that for a poem cookies are awesome

Wha---?