My Fan Fiction! (Shyheart's Flee)
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My Fan Fiction! (Shyheart's Flee)
Clans: RowanClan, BreezeClan, SaphireClan, CloudClan.
The Prologue
Chapter One. (Only part of it, not all)
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- Main Clan: RowanClan (Like ShadowClan)
Leader: Hazelstar- Silver tortoiseshell she-cat with alert amber eyes. (I just had to make myself leader ^.^)
Deputy: Darkshadow- Black tom with white ears and tail tip.
Medicine Cat: Finchcall- Dark brown tabby with intelligent blue eyes
Apprentice- Hopecloud
Warriors: Nightdapple- Dark black she-cat with white flecks
Pinetail- Light brown short-haired tom
Wolfstrike- Dark gray tom with blue eyes
Shyheart- Silver tabby with brilliant icy blue eyes and black paws
Illusionflame- Speckled gray tom
Flamestone- Light ginger tom with golden eyes
Apprentice- Oceanpaw
Fleetwind- Light gray she-cat
Tigerfur- Ginger tabby tom with cautious blue eyes
Stromfang- Impulsive gray tabby tom
Apprentice- Coalpaw
Blackgaze- Ambitious black tom
Shalelight- Light brown long haired she-cat
Apprentice- Rumblepaw
Tawnywhisper- white tortoiseshell she-cat
Apprentice- Larchpaw
Apprentices- Hopecloud- Light gray tabby she-cat, with cautious green eyes
Oceanpaw- dark gray she-cat with strong legs
Coalpaw- Loud black tom
Rumblepaw- Spotted white tom
Larchpaw- Light brown she-cat
Queens- Emberflight- Ginger she-cat (Mother to Duskkit, light gray tom, Crowkit, black tom, and Buzzardkit, ginger tom. Father: Blackgaze)
Spiritblaze- Spotted brown she-cat (Mother to Rainkit, blueish she-cat, Icekit, white she-cat, and Snowkit, pure white she-cat. Father: Illusionflame)
Gingersong- Ginger she-cat with light purple eyes (Mother to Brightkit, a gentle brown she-cat, and Applekit, a ginger she-cat. Father: Wolfstrike)
Elders- Goldendusk- A golden tabby with gentle blue eyes
Thunderclaw- Strong brown tom, quit early due to sight lost
Snakestrike- Gray she-cat, complains alot
Brokenmind ^.^ - Crazy young she-cat with light red eyes, and a ragged tabby pelt she won't let anyone touch. Planned revenge on Hazelstar in Kithood, and as a apprentice, her plans were overheard in her dreams of murderous mumblings by her fellow apprentices. Freaked, they told Hazelstar, and when confronted, Silvertail (her name then) agreed proudly to her plans, right then and there, launching herself at the leader. Due to lucky chances, Darkshadow had pinned her down, asking Hazelstar what would she like to do. Since of the age, Silvertail got sent to the elders den, under close patrol, and held prisoner. She confessed later on that she was better, but Hazelstar didn't budge, instead she changed her name to Brokenmind, and kept her confined. Snakestrike sometimes still complains about her mumblings.
CloudClan (Like ThunderClan)- Violetstar- A gentle gray she-cat with long, muscular legs, and deep purple eyes
Deputy- Larkflight- Brown tabby tom with icy blue eyes and white paws and underbelly
Medicine Cat- Dawnfrost- White she-cat with gray dapples along her back
Warriors- Sunshade- Ginger tabby tom with green eyes
Jumpingspirit- Brown she-cat with dark blue eyes, and a pale tail-tip
Apprentice- Fernpaw
Iceclaw- White she-cat
Apperentice- Springpaw
Hailclaw- Gray tabby tom with light purple eyes (Violetstar's brother)
Whiteout- A strong legged white tom with icy blue eyes
Coonshadow- Brown tabby with amber eyes, and strong legs
Darkfur- Black tom with light memorizing amber eyes
Amberfur- Golden tabby she-cat, one of the best climbers.
Apprentice- Lightpaw
Silverfeather- Gray she-cat, with silver eyes
Apprentice- Fernpaw- Long haired brown tabby she-cat
Springpaw- Shy small white tortoiseshell she-cat with blue eyes
Lightpaw- Exuberent blueish gray she-cat with green eyes
Queens- Dapplelight- Light gray with dark flecks(mother to Blossomkit, black she-cat and Owlkit, light gray tom. Father: Darkfur)
Snowsong- Pure white she-cat with black ears (mother to Hawkkit, a dark brown tom. Father: Larkflight)
Roseleaf- Black she-cat with ginger flecks (mother to Whitekit, a gentle gray she-cat. Father: Hailclaw)
Elders- Shadetalon- Dark brown tabby tom
Redheart- A complaining mottled brown she-cat
Duskfoot- Dark gray tom with green eyes
Snowpoppy- White she-cat with mottled brown spots
SapphireClan (Like RiverClan)- Pebblestar- Tan colored she-cat with bright green eyes
Deputy- Crimsonfur- Dark ginger tabby tom with amber eyes
Medicine Cat- Jadeheart- Light gray she-cat with green eyes
Apprentice- Meadowpaw
Warriors- Moonshimmer- Light silver tabby she-cat with icy blue eyes
Qualfeather- Black tom with a white tail and chest, brilliant green eyes
Riverbreeze- Blue tom with an unatural shaggy tail
Willowsong- Moon colored she-cat with amber eyes
Apprentice- Fogpaw
Creeksplash- Dark brown short-haired she-cat with amber eyes
Petalmist- Brown calico she-cat with deep green eyes
Thorntail- White tom with brown streaks along his sides, not exactly tabby stripes
Apprentice- Rubypaw
Minnowfur- Tan calico tom with gentle honey colored eyes
Apprentice- Fallenpaw
Salmonstripes- A black tom with unatural ginger tabby marks
Apprentices- Fogpaw- Light gray tom with shaded out tabby marks
Rubypaw- A dark ginger she-cat
Fallenpaw- A brown she-cat
Queens- Secretsong- A black she-cat with amber eyes (mother to Mintkit, a honey colored tom, Sagekit, a light cream she-cat and Lilykit, a black she-cat. Father: Pebblestar)
Gingerleap- A light ginger tabby she-cat (mother to Autumnkit, a light ginger she-cat, and Leopardkit, a tan tabby she-cat with unatural spots along her back. Father: Minnowfur)
Rushingwater- A siamese she-cat (mother of two expecting kits. Father: Salmonstripes)
Mossfoot- A long legged golden tabby she-cat with amber eyes.
Elders- Mossmask- A light gray she-cat, with a mottled pelt
Wavecrash- A black tom with tuffs of fur missing over his back and a large scar over his right eye, making him go blind.
BreezeClan (Like Windclan) Leader- Moonstar- A pale white she-cat with icy blue eyes and a black tipped tail
Deputy- Chillingbreeze- A tan tom with amber eyes
Medicine Cat- Amberheart- A ginger she-cat with intelligent light purple eyes
Warriors- Eagleflight- A agile black tom, hides well within the wheat
Foxwhisker- A ginger she-cat with light blue eyes, and a persistant attitude
Apprentice- Gorsepaw
Glowheart- A brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes that glow in the night
Hollyfrost- A white she-cat with silver eyes
Jaggedfeather- A black tom with green eyes
Needlespark- Gray tabby tom with gray eyes
Apprentice- Rosepaw
Fallenrain- A light gray tabby she-cat with unatural blue speckles
Wolfsoul- Dark brown tom with gray underbelly
Apprentice- Snakepaw
Mintfire- Brown she-cat with ginger flecks all over her long-haired pelt
Dewspots- White tom with grass stained marks (rolled in grass to much as kit Lol)
Ashfang- Ash colored tom with green eyes
Apprentices- Gorsepaw- Tan colored tom
Rosepaw- light ginger tabby she-cat with a white underbelly
Snakepaw- dark brown tom with lighter tabby markings
Queens- Blizzardflight- white she-cat, fabulous runner, (mother to Honeykit, a pale siamese she-cat and Cheesekit, a chedder colored she-cat. Father: Ashfang)
Natureheart- Pale she-cat with light icy silver eyes (mother to Windkit, pale tom, Thunderkit, strong dark brown tom, and Sleetkit, a pale tabby she-cat. Father: Wolfsoul)
Elders- Shiningfur- A tan colored she-cat with a proud, always clean pelt.
Wingedheart- Gray tom with lighter patch of fur on his chest, seeming to almost look like a heart
Leafdapple- A dark calico she-cat, oldest out of the four clans
The Prologue
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- Her paws thudded painfully up the step hill, pines, rivers, forests, and moors behind her. The mysterious cat's voice still pounding in her skull, “A shy cat will escape forward, and find something new, a new experience, alone.”
The voice had stated the prophecy at the last gathering, where a large fight had broken out between Shadowclan and Thunderclan.
Over prey. Prey. Shyheart thought painfully, I may be called Shyheart, but that doesn't mean I can't be brave.
The threats, teases, and gossips suddenly pulled past the prophecy, and pounded against her skull instead, “Ha, your lucky to even be a warrior.” “You should just plant yourself in the nursery, you to weak to even hurt a newly apprentice.” “Shyheart? No wonder you don't have a mate, can't speak your own mind, eh?”
She dug her claws into the grass, pulling herself forward, and finding herself at the top of the hill behind Shadowclan. Fields, upon fields spread to her left, twoleg homes dotting the landscape. To her right was a vase ocean, the sun reflecting off the water, and giving her silver pelt a golden glow. Her tail twitched once, and she flicked it at the four clans behind her, leaving the gossips behind, and letting her mind spread new, and open up to the world beyond the warrior code.
Chapter One. (Only part of it, not all)
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- Chapter One
Far Out
Her paws dragged pitifully, her tail making a thin line through the sand. Shyheart's head drooped down, and her tongue was noticeable parch when she licked her lips. She had tried the water from the long waves, only to recoil into herself when the salty taste registered on her taste buds. She had heard about a beach before in Riverclan, but never had experienced the rough sand getting stuck between her paws, or the horrid tasting water.
She padded onward, wanting to find this new life the prophecy had promised. What if this was it? She thought bitterly. If this was, I'd turn back for the clans right then and there.
The sand slowly turned to loose rocks as she walked more, gaining this new determination. Her paws became stronger, her chin higher, tail now parallel to the ground, swiping through the air. She sunk ever so slightly in the stones, before one struck her paw just right, and tore into it.
Shyheart let out a low meow, instinctively licking her paw. As Shyheart licked, she flicked her eyes around her surroundings, noticing a deep rain forest to her right. The sand turning into moss and moor till it made a dark forest, probing Shyheart's curiosity.
Suddenly ignoring the sharp pain in her paw, she turned and padded toward the rain forest, the smell of prey pulling her in.
Last edited by Hazelstorm on December 29th 2011, 19:32; edited 7 times in total
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Re: My Fan Fiction! (Shyheart's Flee)
Nice work on the allegiances! The names are really unique! May I be in your fanfiction?
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Re: My Fan Fiction! (Shyheart's Flee)
awesome! i like the names you chose. those were pretty clever. i like how you didn't make all of the Clan random pretty names but you put regular names in between like Tigerfur. i'm a fan of realistic people. ^^
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~edited, all clans up~
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Re: My Fan Fiction! (Shyheart's Flee)
The names are very unique and beautiful! I love them all! Thanks for adding me in the allegiances! Good work on the names! Looking forward to your prologue and first chapter!
If you need help with writing, feel free to PM me anytime!
If you need help with writing, feel free to PM me anytime!
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I don't suppose you can add me in there. Oh well
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I can! I'll edit it, which clan would you like to be in, and what do you look like? ^.^
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Put me in any Clan you like; it doesn't really matter to me. My appearance would be maybe a big, white tom with ice-blue eyes?
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Ok! Your in ^.^ I put you in CloudClan, their low on warriors, and a strong warrior like you would help
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Queen in Cloudclan.A long legged golden tabby she-cat with amber eyes.
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Lol. Whitepaw turned to Whiteout. Everyone in CloudClan is like: Why did Violetstar add "out" to his name?
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Lol yeah, twoleg lang xD
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Nice allegiances! Would you mind putting me in your fan fiction.
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sure amberfur! I need your favored clan (Probably noy rowanclan) name, and pelt description
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Can I be in CloudClan?
Name: Amberfur(I'll keep my name )
Description: Golden tabby she-cat
Name: Amberfur(I'll keep my name )
Description: Golden tabby she-cat
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~Accepted! If you don't mind, I gave you an apprentice! ^.^~
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Can I be in your Fan-Fic too? You alreay know what my warrior looks like Basically my Avatar.
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I'm in CloudClan? xD haha
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Cool! Thanks for accepting me and it's alright for me to have an apprentice. Tee hee. : Haha I'm a great climber.
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Icetail, lol your already in it as a kit in Rowanclan, (Your sister is Rainkit, Rainfeather, and Snowkit, Snowlily) But if you'd like to be a warrior, Breezeclan surely could us some more warriors, there the lowest at the moment.
And Iceclaw, you never said what clan
And Iceclaw, you never said what clan
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i like how you describe things. it's pretty realistic compared to some stories. ^^ RowanClan sounds cool too.
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Thanks Cheesestar!
~Chapter One up~
~Chapter One up~
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