Mallowkit

Name: Mallowkit, Mallowpaw, Mallownose.
Gender: Male
Age: N/A
Clan: Tribe of Falling Darkness (Past). Riverclan (Current)
Mate: Featherstorm.
Kits: None yet.
Parents: Iceshard and Snakefire
Littermates: Gracesong
Mentor: Ivyfrost
Apprentice: None
Description: Tall, muscular, sturdy dusty brown tom with darker stripes, a white chest, white paws, white belly, and white tail tips. Mallownose has icey sea green eyes. He has a pale pink nose and soft pink inside ears.
Personality: Headstrong, caring to friends and family and mate, protective, stands up for what he believes is right, ready to battle, epic, funny, warm hearted, and awesome!
History: Mallownose was born in the Tribe of Falling Darkness and he grew up a strong and loyal warrior. Soon his mother, Iceshard ran away and Ivystar took over. Ivystar lead the tribe until one faithful night under the full moon. The desert rouges strikes again.. and every cat was fighting for their life. Soon, the tribe broke apart, and Mallownose ran away. Mallownose soon decided to join Riverclan with his mate, Featherstorm, where he lives today.

Nice description! How about you add which Clan or tribe you come from, then others will know where you are from. Maybe you can write your own personality there too.

Looks good so far hun. I agree about the clan bit. Maybe you could have a rank and desired rank section too sincr you are a kit. Eventually, a mate and mentor/apprentice section maybe? What is the other section? Is it like a history piece?

include how your mother and father met. that'd be quite interesting.

I think you should explain what other is lol. Id like to see an example or to of visions of mallowkits future maybe? You could add a history section about your life in the tribe and what happened when iceclan came to the tribe and phoenixkit followed us there. Maybe you can talk about being ina secret kitclan there too?

Wait! WHy'd you tell about my Kitclan? But sure! I'll edit my profile!

Lol because I was in the rp. Almost everyone was. xD don't worry. None of this knowlege is known in the rps. Its just background stuff.