Finchfur's Destiny:Prologue
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Finchfur's Destiny:Prologue
Characters in story
Prologue
- Spoiler:
- ThunderClan
Leader: Branchstar - dark brown tabby tom with glaring amber eyes
Deputy: Pinefall - red - brown tabby tom with hard amber eyes
Medicine Cat: Plumdawn - long - haired pale ginger she - cat with bushy tail
Warriors:
Acornheart - golden - brown tabby tom with green eyes
Speckledcloud - white she - cat with tortoiseshell patches Apprentice: Sunpaw
Leafmist - black and silver tabby she - cat with leaf - like green eyes Apprentice: Sparrowpaw
Mosstail - blue gray she - cat with moss - colored eyes Apprentice: Swiftpaw
Weedwhisker - pale orange tom with hard yellow eyes Apprentice: Stormpaw
Larksong - long - haired toitoiseshell she - cat with pale green eyes Apprentice: Tallpaw
Mumblefoot - dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes
Queens:
Silverfoot - silver she - cat with amber eyes; mother of Mumblefoot's kits: Moonkit and Goosekit
Briarflower - pale brown she - cat; mother of Weedwhisker's kits: Poppykit, Speckledkit, and Brownkit
Apprentices:
Sunpaw - bright ginger tom with yellow eyes
Sparrowpaw - dark brown tabby she - cat
Swiftpaw - white and tabby she - cat
Stormpaw - large gray tom with blue eyes
Tallpaw - bright orange tabby tom with bright green eyes
Elders:
Thornstripe - green - brown tabby tom with amber eyes
RiverClan
Leader: Grassstar - blue - gray tom with cold blue eyes Apprentice: Hailpaw
Deputy: Troutclaw - gray tabby tom Apprentice: Otterpaw
Medicine Cat: Thrushpelt - brown tabby tom with lime green eyes
Warriors:
Finchfur - huge golden tabby tom with menacing amber eyes
Pebblestream - lean gray - black tom with blue eyes Apprentice: Lilypaw
Applestripe - bright red tabby she - cat with green eyes Apprentice: Timberpaw
Swallownose - dark gray tabby tom
Queens:
Iceshine - pale gray she - cat with cold green eyes; expecting Finchfur's kits
Tigermist - brown tabby she - cat; mother of Swallownose's kits: Shellkit and Ripplekit
Apprentices:
Hailpaw - thick - pelted gray tom
Otterpaw - white and pale ginger she - cat
Lilypaw - pale gray she - cat
Timberpaw - brown tom
Elders:
Riverstripe - gray tabby tom with amber eyes
WindClan
Leader: Heatherstar - pinkish - gray she - cat with blue eyes
Deputy: Greenfoot - greenish - gray tom
ShadowClan
Leader: Cedarstar - very dark gray tom with white belly
Deputy: Stonetooth - gray tabby tom with long teeth
Prologue
- Spoiler:
- Finchfur stood in the middle of Fourtrees, sitting next to his former leader.
"Rosestar! Why have you brought me here? Is RiverClan in trouble?" he asked nervously. The pinkish - ginger she - cat did not answer this question immediately, but stared up at Silverpelt.
After a moment she turned her warm amber eyes onto Finchfur and spoke in a very low voice:
He who has been robbed will take revenge,
seeking only a death to be avenged.
You, Finchfur, a golden streak of light,
will be swallowed up by a black river in the night.
The dark water will be your end.
For you, StarClan will not send.
After finishing the prophecy, Rosestar vanished into blackness.
"Wait, Rosestar! What do you mean? I'm not a thief! Please come back! I don't -" Finchfur's words were cut off by a great surge of water rolling over everything and filling his mouth and choking him.
He fought to the surface to breathe, only to be dragged back down again.
Oh StarClan, help me! he thought, desperate for air.
The current carried him into black nothingness, until everything was gone.
"Finchfur! Finchfur! Get up! It's time for dawn patrol!" meowed a familiar voice.
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Re: Finchfur's Destiny:Prologue
Nice propehecy! ^.^
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Re: Finchfur's Destiny:Prologue
Lol suspense. I like it. You're very good at writing prophecies. And the work you put into the list of clan cats is amazing. I'd like to see some more detail and more chapters. Maybe a bit longer? Great work. Keep it up.
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Re: Finchfur's Destiny:Prologue
Thank you so much you are so sweet. I love how you are so positive. And when i have mistakes you are happy to help me thank you.
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Lol I don't do anything special. It's just a bit of feedback but thanks.
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It's pretty good! xD
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Wow I like your prophecy. The way you wrote the prolougues is keeping me in suspense. Great job!
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