Crippled

Note: Please dont take these names without my permission! And yeaah i know it starts off sad but please keep reading to find out what happens to Deadkit!

Fan List
Honeystar


SoulClan
Leader: Fadingstar- pale silver and gray tom with pale silver eyes
Deputy: Freezingnight- silver tabby she cat with ice blue eyes
Medicine Cat: Whispersoul- pale gray she cat with silver eyes

Senior Warriors
Scarface- light brown tabby tom with scars all over his face and pale green eyes
Cobweb- gray-white tom with faint gray stripes and pale blue eyes
Tidewater- blue gray tom with dark blue eyes
Moonshadow- silver and dark gray she cat with pale blue eyes
Leafwhisper- dark brown tabby she cat with pretty pale green eyes
Dawnbright- cream and pale ginger she cat with dark green eyes

Warrior Toms
Wolfmoon- gray tom with thick fur and blue eyes
Flameblaze- flaming ginger tom with an orange flare on his chest and yellow eyes
Burnfire- dark ginger tom with black paws and dark green eyes
Fallingstorm- pale gray and silver tom with pale blue eyes (Fadingstar's first son that survived him and his mates first litter)
Wildstorm- dark gray tom with amber eyes
Darkstorm- black tom with silver eyes and gray paws

Warrior She Cats
Singingwind- pale gray she cat with pale green eyes
Dreamflight- dappled silver, gray and white she cat with silver eyes
Lunapool- dappled silver she cat with dark blue eyes
Mistyleaf- silver and white she cat with light green eyes
Marigoldleaf- golden she cat with fern green eyes
Amberstrike- flaming ginger she cat with an orange flare on her chest and striking amber eyes

Apprentices
Cloudpaw- pale gray and white tom with pale blue eyes (Mentor, Wolfmoon)
Flamingpaw- flaming ginger tom with silver eyes (Mentor, Fadingstar)
Scarletpaw- beautiful dark ginger she cat with amazing golden eyes (Mentor, Amberstrike)
Fishpaw- silver blue-gray tom with pale blue eyes (Mentor, Cobweb)

Queens
Phoenixflare- flaming ginger she cat with a dark ginger flare on her chest and dark green eyes (Mate, Fadingstar)
Swoopingowl- light brown tabby she cat with green eyes (Mate, Scarface)
Shadowflicker- black she cat with pretty sapphire blue eyes (Mate, Darkstorm)

Kits
Soulkit- pale silver and gray tom with silver eyes
Flaringkit- flaming ginger she cat with dark ginger paws and dark green eyes

Vortexkit- silver and light brown tom with silver eyes
Soaringkit- light brown tabby she cat with pale blue eyes
Runningkit- pale gray and light brown tabby tom with silver eyes and white paws. He is very agile and the fastest kit

Hazekit- pale gray tom with silver eyes and gray paws
Edgekit- silver, white and black tom with blue eyes and very sharp, long claws
Deadkit- black tom with silver eyes, silver underbelly and flare on his chest and he has a silver paw. His silver paw is crippled but he is one of the best fighter/hunter in the clan

Prologue
Deadkit's eyes widened as he heard screeches coming from the medicine cat's den. Whispersoul raced out of the den her mouth filled with herbs. "Run!" She yowled her voice slightly muffled because of the herbs. Cats were racing out of camp all around him, their paws thundering in his ears. All of a sudden the medicine cat's den exploded in fire. The fire quickly spread out catching fire to the entire camp with him, Hazekit and Edgekit right in the middle of it. Deadkit looked over and saw his mother. "Kits! It will be alright! Climb out of camp!" Shadowflicker replied the fire blocking her from her kits. "Come on! This way!" Deadkit screeched pushing his brothers toward the rocks. He pushed Edgekit up and he grabbed onto a rock pulling himself up. Hazekit leaped beside his brother, Edgekit. Deadkit leaped onto the edge one paw only gripping. Hazekit pulled him up. "Th-thanks." Deadkit breathed. Hazekit nodded panting. All of a sudden a growl from behind the 3 kits roared behind them. Deadkit slowly looked around and saw a huge badger. "Run Hazekit, Edgekit. Go get the clan and come as fast as you can." Deadkit whispered not moving an inch. "B-but what about you?" Edgekit whispered his eyes sad and distressed. "Dont worry about me... go!" He mewed firmly. Hazekit pushed Edgekit and they raced away. The badger tried to run after them but Deadkit leaped into the air slashing at its shoulder. The badger growled snarling in rage. It slashed Deadkit's shoulder leaving a deep scratch. Deadkit clawed the badger side. It roared and leaped for Deadkit's paw. It grabbed his paw in its mouth shaking it fiercely. Deadkit had never felt the most pain he felt now. The badger bit down deep into his paw and threw him aside. Deadkit blinked struggling to his paws. The badger snarled and grabbed Deadkit twisting his paw now and sending him back down into the flaming camp. Deadkit rolled down and struggled to his paws once more climbing up to meet the badger's challenge. So, this is the end? I'll live up to my name He thought sadly. The badger roared and Deadkit raced forward and slit the badger's neck. The badger roared and fell sending dirt flying into Deadkit's pelt. Deadkit fell beside the dead badger breathing heavily cradling his twisted crippled paw. Why StarClan? Why me? He whimpered looking up at the starry night. The stars of his ancestors shinned back on him speechless. Everything went black.

Wow this story is amazing! Keep writing! It's so sad, Poor Deadkit.

Err, what's going on? I read that the badger collapsed and there was a fire and deadkit died

I love it so far. Hope to see more soon. Fan me.

Riversplash ( Shadowclan) wrote:Err, what's going on? I read that the badger collapsed and there was a fire and deadkit died

Well... Deadkit killed the badger and was sent onto a rock in the camp which burst in fire because of the sun (it was greenleaf in the story) it is at night and the rest of the clan is at a temporary camp. Deadkit is not dead. Btw I'll chapter 1 soon but for now Im making a fan list Hopefully I wont abandon this fan fic lol