The legend of Brightclan

shineclan
Leader spirtstar-dark gray she-cat with amber eyes
deputy sandyflight-dark ginger she-cat with one white paw
med.cat streamstorm-dark gray tom
warriors
moontail-gary she-cat
Apprentice,graypaw
creamfang-cream furred tom
wetpuddle-dark calico she-cat
darksnow-pale tabby
Apprentice,novapaw
forestpelt-tabby tom
Apprentice,peacepaw
Apprentices
graypaw-long hairred solid gray tom
novapaw-dark brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes
peacepaw-gray she-cat with dark blue eyes
queens
paletail-very pale gray she-cat
elders
tanglepelt-ragged furred tabby tom
brightclan
leader brightstar-dark ginger tom with white paws and tipped tail
deputy Icebark-dark brown tabby she-cat with green eyes and yellow stripes
apprentice,flightpaw
med.cat swiftbird-black tom with blood staned on his head and red tail
apprentice,Ivorypaw
warriors
firestone-dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes and darker stripes
apprentice,molttedpaw
clawfur-ginger and white tom with a torn eye
snowyfur-white she-cat
thornmask-moltted brown tabby she-cat with a long jaw
brokenface-black and white she-cat with a broad almost flatened face
Apprentices
Ivorypaw-gray tabby she-cat with blind blue eyes
flightpaw-black tom with green eyes
molttedpaw-golden tabby she-cat with amber eyes
queens
moonshine-blue-gray tabby she-cat
sunfall-dappled golden she-cat
elders
crookedtail-gray she-cat with a crooked tail

Proluge
Niko padded thourgh the forest.then he stopped he saw a dark gray she-cat."What are you doing on spirtclan territory.She snapped."S-Sorry."He said."I was looking for shelter."He told her."Then you comed to the right place,welcome to shineclan camp."She said."My name is spirtstar leader of shineclan." She went on."Do you want to create a clan?"She asked."Yes.But how do I?"He said."Well, you take as many cats that are inrested.Then you choose your and their rank leader,deputy,med.cat,warrior,apprentice,queen,or elder."She told him."Well."She aseked."Yes I'll do it.It will be the biggest clan."He said.Then he ran back to twolegplace to tell the others they'll have to like it.

Interesting names you've got there Crookedjaw! But do make sure you have proper grammar and capitalization or it would be difficult for others to read! Everything's worth a try~

I suppose that's a fanfiction? Good work!

Chapter 1
"Wow."Niko's friend rocky purred with shock."Well did you say yes?"Asked his other friend devin."Yes."He told him.His other friends yossie,fang,Ryn,slash,and frosty."I think our clan shoud be called brightclan,I will be called brightstar,ryn will be called Icebark and will be my deputy,and devin will be called swiftbird and will be med.cat,rocky will be called firestone,yossie will be called clawfur,frosty will be called snowyfur,fang will be called thornmask,slash will be called brokenface,theese other cats will be called Ivorypaw swiftbird will be her mentor,flightpaw Icebark will mentor him,molttedpaw firestone will mentor her,moonshine,sunfall,and croookedtail".He said.All the cats nodded their heads and went into the shadows.

Emm if you don't mind, Crookedjaw, could you perhaps space them out a little? Its hard to read...

It is hard to read but from what i can read it is good

Yeah... there are some rather nice names!
Looking forward to chapter 2~