Dawn

First topic message reminder :

Ivypaw stretched. She flexed her claws, eyes gleaming. Today, she was going to patrol ShadowClan's borders with her Clanmates! ShadowClan had stolen from ThunderClan enough times. Ivypaw slipped out of the apprentice's den, blinking away sleep. "Ivypaw! There you are! Are you ready?" Cinderheart was hurrying toward her, eyes round with worry. "Of cour-" Ivypaw began. Cinderheart interrupted her apprentice. "Did you hear the most recent news from the moonhigh patrol?" the smoky grey she-cat fretted. "WindClan has started to hunt in out territory as well!" Ivypaw bared her teeth, and spat, "WindClan! Those scrawny, rabbit-munchers!" Cinderheart circled Ivypaw, her pelt brushing Ivypaw's silver-and-white one. "Come on," she urged, "Lionblaze, Thornclaw, and Graystripe are waiting." Ivypaw flicked her tail crossly as Cinderheart went on, "Stay beside me if there's a battle."
I'm not a kit! Ivypaw shrugged away her mentor. "I'm not a kit!" she snapped aloud. Cinderheart blinked in surprise. "Hurry up, then," her voice became brisk. Ivypaw shot past Cinderheart to join the leaving border patrol.

"ShadowClan sent!" Thornclaw declared, pelt bristling. Graystripe let out a low hiss. "Incoming patrol!" he warned suddenly. Ivypaw tasted the air. "WindClan?" she asked, frowning. "You can't be serious!" Lionblaze protested as a massive patrol surged toward the ThunderClan cats. "Hello," Rowanclaw's voice was smooth as honey. Ivypaw bristled. ShadowClan was being themselves, annoying as ever. "Mouse-hearts," a voice hissed. Cinderheart let out a shocked growl. "Breezepelt?" She flicked her tail. "Is ShadowClan recruiting WindClan cats now?" Graystripe hissed, arching his back. Rowanclaw spat in malice. "Shut up!" he snarled. "Patrol, attack!" Ivypaw gaped in horror as the huge group rushed on to the ThunderClan group, snarling, claws unsheathed. Redwillow slammed into her, pummeling her belly with his claws. Ivypaw ducked and nipped viciously cat the ShadowClan warrior, but Redwillow wouldn't budge. He bit at her throat, as she wriggled, desperate to free herself. No! Ivypaw let out a inward wail as her vision faded to black.

Me! I liked this one

I did too! And Brightstar should continue writing this one.... >_>

I love it!

Yah! Keep writing!