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Post by Frost June 24th 2013, 01:25

Rogue Name: Frost

Warrior Name: Frostshadow

Age: 21 moons

Group: Rogue

Rank: Best Rogue Ever

Attack Power:100,000

Apprentice: N/A

Description: Short-haired white she-cat with fur that darkens at the ends. Slightly smaller than average, she is light-footed and agile. However from many months of training, she has toughened up and is sturdily built. The unique black markings on her face resembles a mask and gives her a fierce appearance. Her left eye is a cloudy blue from blindness and her right eye is green-blue.

Personality: Adaptable, independent and intelligent. Her personality depends on who she is with. Around strangers or enemies, she is sardonic and cynical despite her outward appearance of seriousness and dangerousness. She doesn't let others mess with her. Stubbon and generally suspicious of everyone. The Clans know her as Frostshadow and that's when she becomes a friendly happy-go-lucky she-cat.

Special Traits: A highly advanced fighter, especially in the dark. Because of her disability, her senses are much sharper than average. Surprisingly strong. She knows the Big City and her territory very well and uses her knowledge as an advantage.

Weaknessess: Occasionally gets flashes of her old past which can be deadly to her as she will lose focus in whatever she is doing. Has a fear of heights but tries not to show it. Her greatest flaw is her greatest strength - her disability makes hunting and seeing harder. Not as fast as other cats, she relies more on her strength and wits.

Family: Unknown.

History: Unknown.


My heartfelt thanks to Nocte, Caraway, Noxe and Caligo for the creation of Masqueraders! Also to those I referred your character sheets as well as anyone who reads this! Hope you all like it and do tell me if I should make some improvements!


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Post by Noxe June 24th 2013, 10:02

It's really good Very Happy we still need to know the general history plan thingy for the masqueraders so we need to sort out that doc >.< BUT ANYWAYS you should have a banner that would be cool. Like all the Masqueraders should have banners on their charrie sheets :3
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Post by Nyx June 24th 2013, 11:42

It's really good Phanny (8 You should add some pictures too. And I can make banners if you want~
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Post by Frost July 15th 2013, 08:45

Edited my description, weaknesses and special traits :DD

Well, finding such a picture would be hard for my character but if you have any good pictures, do send me!
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Post by Torrentheart July 15th 2013, 08:58

Woahh, I like it! Very Happy

One thing and the only thing I did notice was that you have unbalanced weaknesses/special traits

WEAKNESSES: Bad hunter, loses focus occasionally, fear of heights, stubborn

SPECIAL TRAITS: Fast, silent, good fighter, good swimmer, really strong, strong senses

Well, I kind of think that you don't exactly need to take off much from Special Traits and add the as a weakness, but maybe just take off a few in the special traits and add some more in the weaknesses. Mainly it's just her physical... 'powers' that I see are unbalanced.

So yeah. But the organization and whole sheet is really nice (:
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Post by Frost July 15th 2013, 23:46

Updated! Thanks Torrentheart Very Happy
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Post by Noxe July 16th 2013, 09:57

You're welcome Very Happy It's really good, I like how you explained your special traits and weaknesses.
I tried to help you find some pictures...
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*edit: oops they don't have the black patches. but you could edit them in...?*


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Post by Torrentheart July 16th 2013, 10:14

Here are some pictures:
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Haha, you were right, it's hard to match your character. Those were the best I could find, though ^^
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Post by Nyx July 16th 2013, 10:35

I like Torry's first one. My photo-editing skills are always available c:

And by the way, did you ever get the banner I sent you?
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