Leafgaze's story Ancestors call

Chapter one
Leafkit scampered out of the nursery after Hailkit and Mistkit.
"Wait!" Leafkit panted,"Please slow down!" Leafkit stopped and walkked out of the nursery
"Sorry sis," Hailkit slowed his pace till they stopped in front of the nursery. Dreamkit had stopped also
"Sorry Leafkit!" Dreamkit stared at the marking on her eye. Then there mother walked on the high ledge.
"Look it's Seerstar!" Leafkit murmured.


~more coming soon!~

So their mother is the leader! I'd love to see how that works out! I look forward to more reading!

Awesome! Keep up the good work, Bramble!

Thanks I finished some more

Seerstar leaped off the highrock and padded up to Leafkit and her littermates, they all quickly scattered into their line. Hailkit in the middle, Leafkit a step behind on the left side and Mistkit on the other side. Her littermates and her sat down and stared up at their mother
"Are you ready?" Seerstar asked them. They all nodded and groomed themselves. Leafkit watched Seerstar pad away toward, Larchfoot, the deputy. Stormtail, her father was there to sitting proudly. Seerstar nodded as she passed, she leaped on the ledge and called a meeting. Hailkit, Mistkit, and Leafkit scrambled to the front and sat waiting.

Also I am rewriting it to get published

Nice story, Bramblesky. When will more of it be posted?

First, Leafshine, this topic is pretty old so we probably shouldn't be posting on it o.o second, more won't be coming because...Bramblesky's sorta banned. I'm not being strict, I just wanna let you know.