DawnStorm~
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DawnStorm~
by Ren November 21st 2012, 23:30
First topic message reminder :
PROFILE:
http://www.warriorcatsforum.com/u982
LIFE STORIES:
http://www.warriorcatsforum.com/t2591-dawnstorm-s-life-stories
Name
Dawnkit/Dawnpaw/Dawnstorm (Current)
Reason for Name
Dawn: Her pelt,of course Storm: Because her pelt looks like it's clouds raining down a storm of dawn. Also because of her fiery and passion in everything.
Clan:
WindClan
Rank:
Warrior
Age:
20 moons
Gender:
She-cat
Mate:
Lunarlight (Former Mate), Thunderclaw (Present)
Kits:
Flamekit (Thunderclaw), Swiftkit (Thunderclaw), Heatherkit (Thunderclaw), Honeykit (Thunderclaw), Gingerlion (adopted)
Parents:
Rosetail (Mother), Onestar (Father)
Siblings:
Deathfoot, Spice, Flametail, Dappleleaf (adopted), Birdflight (adopted)
Well-Known Kin:
Cloudsong, Rogueblossom, Firestar, Squirrelflight, Leafpool, Swiftpaw, Honeyleaf, Moonblossom, Sunpaw, Mudclaw, Muddywing, Crowfeather, Morningflower
Mentors:
Ashfoot
Apprentices:
Gingerlion
Favorite Fresh-Kill:
Snowshoe rabbit, red-tailed hawk, rainbow trout (above all)
Hobbies
Hunting, fighting, planning battle tactics, hanging, racing, chasing rabbits, organizing herbs/clan dens, splashing in shallow water, playing games, visiting the nursery, playing/sparing with friends, patrolling the camp, training, practicing skills, climbing trees, sleeping when bored
Personality:
Resourceful, Nice, humorous, strong, fit, friendly, welcoming, smart, swift, wise, cautious, fierce, traditional, fun, loving, experimenting, playing, confident, easing, soothing, playful, quick-witted, keen, stubborn, angered easily, mean sometimes, independent,
Skills:
Dawnstorm's most exceptional skill would be hunting and tracking. She excels in it has always come naturally to her paws. She can also run fairly fast and gracefully, as a WindClan cat should. She has agile and graceful paws that enable her to not slip as easily, making running even better for her. Her climbing skills are okay, but she is certainly not nearly as good as even a ThunderClan cat. Her tunneling is not bad, either, but she never was as meant for digging as another cat would be. She isn't exactly experienced in stalking or sneaking, but it is certainly better than her tunneling and climbing skills.
Description:
A pretty, lean, lithe figure with a colorful pelt. She has a silver-brown pelt with some dusky brown smeared on it, white tipped paws and tail, and a white underbelly. Her face is brown-silver as well. Her tabby markings are dark brown and blend well with her natural fur color. She has a wash of all colors of dawn, including a little, light shade of purple. Her undercoat us thick and her overcoat is thin. Her round, perfect eyes are a light hazel that blend in well through brush and undergrowth. She has 6 inch claws when fully outstretched, and 3 inch fangs. She has a long, round tail that, in leaf-bare, fans out like feathers. Her paws have little fur on them, allowing a quick and quiet pace. Her legs and long and narrow so she can climb easily. Her claws are slightly curved to also enhance running, hunting, and climbing. She has long whiskers that show most of her expression.
History:
Dawnkit's life as a kit was not bad. Her father, Onestar, often went into the nursery and practiced hunting stances with her and her litter-mates. Her mother was gentle, kind, and nice all around. Her father was sometimes disciplinary when it came to them disobeying him or their mother, so her and her littermates were raised well. Her and her sister Brownkit (Spice) were the only kits of that litter, their other 2 siblings Deathpaw and Flamepaw being apprentices. Dawnkit often snuck out of camp with her brother, Deathpaw, and went to the lake with him. Deathpaw was her rolemodel at the time. Dawnkit was very mischievous; often she pestered the warriors and taught herself to climb trees to taunt the birds and squirrels. She lost a claw while attacking a rabbit that ran its way into camp; she attacked it, but it turned around during battle and ripped the claw off. Her father killed it, and she was sent to the medicine cat and then back to the nursery, and became more under her mother's eye. Overall, Dawnkit's kit life was a pretty good introduction to the world.
Dawnpaw was granted the deputy, Ashfoot, as a mentor. Ashfoot was good to her; she was wise and patient during Dawnpaw's training. Seeing Dawnpaw's succession in hunting, Ashfoot often practiced Dawnpaw's fighting training on big hares, racoons, those things because she was small, so often those animals were like another cat to her. She also taught her strategies on how to jump high and climb. Dawnpaw loved jumping and sliding down the moors with her mentor and also racing Ashfoot down and up them. She also learned swimming, where she almost drowned. Ashfoot then helped Dawnpaw out by practicing swimming everyday, and when she could stay in the water for a while she got to practice her favorite skills or do a race. She often played with the kits in the nursery, and met many of her clanmates. She favored the medicine cat apprentice, Dappleleaf, and Honeypaw the most. Honeypaw and her often played on the moors after training. She visited Dappleleaf often as well and taught her some uses of basic herbs and cures for injuries or diseases, which was very useful for Dawnpaw. Her sister, Brownpaw, then left with her mentor one day and never came back. While hunting with Ashfoot and Honeypaw one day, Dawnpaw saw Brownpaw and her mentor had become a kittypet because both were wearing golden collars and were greeted by twolegs. She went to talk with them, and they said they preferred there kittypet life. Dawnpaw was disappointed she wouldn't train with her sister anymore, but she eventually got over it and took her final warrior test. Her test was easily passed. The hunting trial was bringing 6 large hares down and bring them back to camp in from dawn to dusk. The swimming trial was staying in the water for an hour and catching 3 fish without getting out. The running and climbing trial was running through a course of bushes and trees and doing many obstacles. Her jumping trial was jumping up on the tallest moors in the valley 3 times. without your claw's helping. Then she quickly became Dawnstorm, and sadly that day her mentor Ashfoot died and Onestar appointed Honeytongue deputy after her ceremony. Her apprentice life was sad, wonderful, and interesting for the most part.
Dawnstorm had fun as a warrior. She met many more warriors, like Lightningstorm, Rockpetal, Sparkflame, and Sagedapple. She still played with Honeyleaf, and finally Honeyleaf and Dappleleaf had become her adopted sisters, approved by Dawnstorm's mother. She never had an apprentice, but she hopes that one day she will. Eventually, her father died of Greencough and Honeystar became leader, and her best friend Birdflight became deputy. Her mother died of greencough eventually, as well. She was devastated, but her friends and other family comforted her and she recovered quickly. Her best-friend brother Flamtail and Deathfoot dissapeared while on a mission together later, as well. Dawnstorm still visited Spice sometimes and still visited the nursery. She later met Lunarlight, who was a loner, but once their love became official they quickly broke up. After that though, she met Thunderclaw, and he became her official mate in AwesomeClan. Finally, she was granted Gingerpaw as an apprentice. Soon, Gingerpaw became Gingerlion, and DawnStorm adopted her as her kit, because she knew her young apprentice was in need of a cat to call mother. She is also now pregnant with 4 beautiful kits that are soon-to-come. She also was aloud to go to more gatherings, and met many more people in many different clans like Cheesestar, Brightstar, Sunbeam, Streamfur, Icestar, and many other cats. Now, Dawnstorm is living a perfect life, and can't wait to start some more adventures.
Origins:
WindClan - DawnStorm's family's last 5 generations has resided here. Many were leaders/deputies
SkyClan - Before moving to WindClan, DawnStorm's family were great SkyClan warriors. They were forced to move to SkyClan because despite being related to the founder of the leader, they were falsely accused of murder
ThunderClan - DawnStorm is related to the founder of ThunderClan, Thunder. Her family resided in ThunderClan for a very, very long time before they were forced to move to SkyClan.
Minor Origins:
ShadowClan - One of her old family members from when her family lived with ThunderClan, Orchidspring, followed her friend to ShadowClan. Orchidspring's best friend, Lilyshadow, left ThunderClan for ShadowClan. Orichispring couldn't bare life without her friend, so she joined ShadowClan with him. She became his mate soon after and they had kits. They grew up in ShadowClan, but died off before the family started another generation of ShadowClan kits. But of course, some of the ShadowClan origins were passed down.
Rogue - When DawnStorm's family was in SkyClan, one of her other family members, Wolfspirit, became a rogue. He turned evil and joined Dark Forest. He never mated or anything, so once he died his generation did not pass on majorly.
Traits recieved from Origins:
Loyal - WindClan/ThunderClan
Fierce - ThunderClan/ShadowClan
Brave - ThunderClan
Respectful - WindClan/SkyClan
Hard to earn trust - Rogue/ShadowClan
Clever - ShadowClan/SkyClan
Strong - WindClan
Love Heights - SkyClan
Physical Traits recieved by Origins:
Long legs - WindClan
Long fangs/claws - ShadowClan/rogue
Thick undercoat - ThunderClan
Thin Overcoat - SkyClan
Soft fur - SkyClan/WindClan
Tabby markings - ShadowClan
Long ears - WindClan
Long Tail - WindClan/ThunderClan
Fighting Skills Recieved from Origins (Things that appeal to her more/she learned better from ancestors)
Speed/Agility - WindClan/SkyClan/ThunderClan
Climbing/Jumping - SkyClan
Hunting - ThunderClan/ShadowClan
Silence - ShadowClan/rogue
Tunneling - WindClan
Fighting - ShadowClan/Rogue/ThunderClan
DETAILS (Credit to Lightningstorm
)
FAMILY/RELATIONS/PICTURES:
PARENTS:
SKILLS (Credit to Windystorm)
N = Despise/enemy
1 = Stranger
2 = Aquaitance
3 = Friendly
4 = Good friend
5 = Best friend
6 = Sibling
7 = Mate
8 = Okay
PROFILE:
http://www.warriorcatsforum.com/u982
LIFE STORIES:
http://www.warriorcatsforum.com/t2591-dawnstorm-s-life-stories
Name
Dawnkit/Dawnpaw/Dawnstorm (Current)
Reason for Name
Dawn: Her pelt,of course Storm: Because her pelt looks like it's clouds raining down a storm of dawn. Also because of her fiery and passion in everything.
Clan:
WindClan
Rank:
Warrior
Age:
20 moons
Gender:
She-cat
Mate:
Lunarlight (Former Mate), Thunderclaw (Present)
Kits:
Flamekit (Thunderclaw), Swiftkit (Thunderclaw), Heatherkit (Thunderclaw), Honeykit (Thunderclaw), Gingerlion (adopted)
Parents:
Rosetail (Mother), Onestar (Father)
Siblings:
Deathfoot, Spice, Flametail, Dappleleaf (adopted), Birdflight (adopted)
Well-Known Kin:
Cloudsong, Rogueblossom, Firestar, Squirrelflight, Leafpool, Swiftpaw, Honeyleaf, Moonblossom, Sunpaw, Mudclaw, Muddywing, Crowfeather, Morningflower
Mentors:
Ashfoot
Apprentices:
Gingerlion
Favorite Fresh-Kill:
Snowshoe rabbit, red-tailed hawk, rainbow trout (above all)
Hobbies
Hunting, fighting, planning battle tactics, hanging, racing, chasing rabbits, organizing herbs/clan dens, splashing in shallow water, playing games, visiting the nursery, playing/sparing with friends, patrolling the camp, training, practicing skills, climbing trees, sleeping when bored
Personality:
Resourceful, Nice, humorous, strong, fit, friendly, welcoming, smart, swift, wise, cautious, fierce, traditional, fun, loving, experimenting, playing, confident, easing, soothing, playful, quick-witted, keen, stubborn, angered easily, mean sometimes, independent,
Skills:
Dawnstorm's most exceptional skill would be hunting and tracking. She excels in it has always come naturally to her paws. She can also run fairly fast and gracefully, as a WindClan cat should. She has agile and graceful paws that enable her to not slip as easily, making running even better for her. Her climbing skills are okay, but she is certainly not nearly as good as even a ThunderClan cat. Her tunneling is not bad, either, but she never was as meant for digging as another cat would be. She isn't exactly experienced in stalking or sneaking, but it is certainly better than her tunneling and climbing skills.
Description:
A pretty, lean, lithe figure with a colorful pelt. She has a silver-brown pelt with some dusky brown smeared on it, white tipped paws and tail, and a white underbelly. Her face is brown-silver as well. Her tabby markings are dark brown and blend well with her natural fur color. She has a wash of all colors of dawn, including a little, light shade of purple. Her undercoat us thick and her overcoat is thin. Her round, perfect eyes are a light hazel that blend in well through brush and undergrowth. She has 6 inch claws when fully outstretched, and 3 inch fangs. She has a long, round tail that, in leaf-bare, fans out like feathers. Her paws have little fur on them, allowing a quick and quiet pace. Her legs and long and narrow so she can climb easily. Her claws are slightly curved to also enhance running, hunting, and climbing. She has long whiskers that show most of her expression.
History:
Dawnkit's life as a kit was not bad. Her father, Onestar, often went into the nursery and practiced hunting stances with her and her litter-mates. Her mother was gentle, kind, and nice all around. Her father was sometimes disciplinary when it came to them disobeying him or their mother, so her and her littermates were raised well. Her and her sister Brownkit (Spice) were the only kits of that litter, their other 2 siblings Deathpaw and Flamepaw being apprentices. Dawnkit often snuck out of camp with her brother, Deathpaw, and went to the lake with him. Deathpaw was her rolemodel at the time. Dawnkit was very mischievous; often she pestered the warriors and taught herself to climb trees to taunt the birds and squirrels. She lost a claw while attacking a rabbit that ran its way into camp; she attacked it, but it turned around during battle and ripped the claw off. Her father killed it, and she was sent to the medicine cat and then back to the nursery, and became more under her mother's eye. Overall, Dawnkit's kit life was a pretty good introduction to the world.
Dawnpaw was granted the deputy, Ashfoot, as a mentor. Ashfoot was good to her; she was wise and patient during Dawnpaw's training. Seeing Dawnpaw's succession in hunting, Ashfoot often practiced Dawnpaw's fighting training on big hares, racoons, those things because she was small, so often those animals were like another cat to her. She also taught her strategies on how to jump high and climb. Dawnpaw loved jumping and sliding down the moors with her mentor and also racing Ashfoot down and up them. She also learned swimming, where she almost drowned. Ashfoot then helped Dawnpaw out by practicing swimming everyday, and when she could stay in the water for a while she got to practice her favorite skills or do a race. She often played with the kits in the nursery, and met many of her clanmates. She favored the medicine cat apprentice, Dappleleaf, and Honeypaw the most. Honeypaw and her often played on the moors after training. She visited Dappleleaf often as well and taught her some uses of basic herbs and cures for injuries or diseases, which was very useful for Dawnpaw. Her sister, Brownpaw, then left with her mentor one day and never came back. While hunting with Ashfoot and Honeypaw one day, Dawnpaw saw Brownpaw and her mentor had become a kittypet because both were wearing golden collars and were greeted by twolegs. She went to talk with them, and they said they preferred there kittypet life. Dawnpaw was disappointed she wouldn't train with her sister anymore, but she eventually got over it and took her final warrior test. Her test was easily passed. The hunting trial was bringing 6 large hares down and bring them back to camp in from dawn to dusk. The swimming trial was staying in the water for an hour and catching 3 fish without getting out. The running and climbing trial was running through a course of bushes and trees and doing many obstacles. Her jumping trial was jumping up on the tallest moors in the valley 3 times. without your claw's helping. Then she quickly became Dawnstorm, and sadly that day her mentor Ashfoot died and Onestar appointed Honeytongue deputy after her ceremony. Her apprentice life was sad, wonderful, and interesting for the most part.
Dawnstorm had fun as a warrior. She met many more warriors, like Lightningstorm, Rockpetal, Sparkflame, and Sagedapple. She still played with Honeyleaf, and finally Honeyleaf and Dappleleaf had become her adopted sisters, approved by Dawnstorm's mother. She never had an apprentice, but she hopes that one day she will. Eventually, her father died of Greencough and Honeystar became leader, and her best friend Birdflight became deputy. Her mother died of greencough eventually, as well. She was devastated, but her friends and other family comforted her and she recovered quickly. Her best-friend brother Flamtail and Deathfoot dissapeared while on a mission together later, as well. Dawnstorm still visited Spice sometimes and still visited the nursery. She later met Lunarlight, who was a loner, but once their love became official they quickly broke up. After that though, she met Thunderclaw, and he became her official mate in AwesomeClan. Finally, she was granted Gingerpaw as an apprentice. Soon, Gingerpaw became Gingerlion, and DawnStorm adopted her as her kit, because she knew her young apprentice was in need of a cat to call mother. She is also now pregnant with 4 beautiful kits that are soon-to-come. She also was aloud to go to more gatherings, and met many more people in many different clans like Cheesestar, Brightstar, Sunbeam, Streamfur, Icestar, and many other cats. Now, Dawnstorm is living a perfect life, and can't wait to start some more adventures.
Origins:
WindClan - DawnStorm's family's last 5 generations has resided here. Many were leaders/deputies
SkyClan - Before moving to WindClan, DawnStorm's family were great SkyClan warriors. They were forced to move to SkyClan because despite being related to the founder of the leader, they were falsely accused of murder
ThunderClan - DawnStorm is related to the founder of ThunderClan, Thunder. Her family resided in ThunderClan for a very, very long time before they were forced to move to SkyClan.
Minor Origins:
ShadowClan - One of her old family members from when her family lived with ThunderClan, Orchidspring, followed her friend to ShadowClan. Orchidspring's best friend, Lilyshadow, left ThunderClan for ShadowClan. Orichispring couldn't bare life without her friend, so she joined ShadowClan with him. She became his mate soon after and they had kits. They grew up in ShadowClan, but died off before the family started another generation of ShadowClan kits. But of course, some of the ShadowClan origins were passed down.
Rogue - When DawnStorm's family was in SkyClan, one of her other family members, Wolfspirit, became a rogue. He turned evil and joined Dark Forest. He never mated or anything, so once he died his generation did not pass on majorly.
Traits recieved from Origins:
Loyal - WindClan/ThunderClan
Fierce - ThunderClan/ShadowClan
Brave - ThunderClan
Respectful - WindClan/SkyClan
Hard to earn trust - Rogue/ShadowClan
Clever - ShadowClan/SkyClan
Strong - WindClan
Love Heights - SkyClan
Physical Traits recieved by Origins:
Long legs - WindClan
Long fangs/claws - ShadowClan/rogue
Thick undercoat - ThunderClan
Thin Overcoat - SkyClan
Soft fur - SkyClan/WindClan
Tabby markings - ShadowClan
Long ears - WindClan
Long Tail - WindClan/ThunderClan
Fighting Skills Recieved from Origins (Things that appeal to her more/she learned better from ancestors)
Speed/Agility - WindClan/SkyClan/ThunderClan
Climbing/Jumping - SkyClan
Hunting - ThunderClan/ShadowClan
Silence - ShadowClan/rogue
Tunneling - WindClan
Fighting - ShadowClan/Rogue/ThunderClan
DETAILS (Credit to Lightningstorm
)- Spoiler:
Childhood
Birthplace: An abandoned tree stump
Clan Born into: WindClan
First
memory: Hearing the sweet voices of new-leaf
First words: "Woah...."
First toy: A stuffed rabbit that a twoleg had left on the moors
Type of childhood: Happy, fun, awesome
Biggest childhood fear: ShadowClan, twolegs, watching cats suffer
Biggest childhood trauma: Seeing a cat die from the paws of another
Biggest childhood dream: Prancing in a meadow with StarClan, mainly her dead sister
Biggest childhood hero: Her brother, Deathpaw(foot)
Childhood friends: Windykit, Honeytongue, Heatherkit, her family, Lightningstorm, Rockpetal, Gingerblaze
Childhood enemies: Darklion
Most memorable event: Her First Gathering
Most
embarrassing event: Getting stuck in a tree as a kit, and having her mother have to come up and get her while the whole clan watched
Main childhood beliefs: StarClan
Favorite time of the year: Leaf fall and New leaf
Least favorite time of the year: Greenleaf, Bare leaf
Favorite food: Mice, rabbits, hawks, and, above all, trout
Least favorite food: Snake, owl, rat, vole
Favorite colors: Light blue, light purple, neon green, orange, brown, gray
Least favorite colors: Black, red, yellow
Other details: Hates water, but loves rain
Main authority figure: Onestar
Favorite thing taught during training: Fighting/Hunting and climbing
Least favorite thing taught: swimming, jumping, camouflage
Favorite activities: Running, hunting, climbing, jumping, hunting, fighting
Least favorite activities: Swimming, hiding, going on patrols with apprentices
Religion: StarClan
Level of activity: High
Level of influence: Strong
Physical abilities: Running, fighting (surprise attacks) , hunting, stalking, climbing, hanging, use of claws
Physical Description: Muscular, lean, strong legs and jaw, long legs, long tail, small, broad-shouldered
Facial color: The colors of dawn in layers (including some purple)
Facial markings: dark brown tabby markings, silver tail, left paw, and left ear
Head shape: Normal
Eye shape: Normal, close-slitted
Eye size: Normal
Eye position: Normal
Eye color: Amber
Pupil shape: Depends on lighting, otherwise normal
Muzzle shape: Broad
Muzzle length: Medium length
Ear shape: Normal-sized and fuzzy
Ear size: tall
Fur length: Medium-short. Grows long in leaf-bare
Fur color: All the colors of dawn, with silver tail, left ear, and left paw
Tail shape: Normal, round
Tail markings: Tabby
Other features: Some believe she has a white star on her back
Eating habits: Dawnstorm has learned to go easy on food, so normally she goes slow
Walking habits: Relaxed 24/7, but still quick
Sleeping habits: Curled up or on her paws, belly facing the ground. She only does the belly-ground position when she feels unsettled so she can pop up when needed.
Nervous habits: Shuffling paws, licking claws and paws with big eyes
Quirks: Charming, good-natured smile, teasing, beautiful, wise looking
Strengths: Running, climbing, jumping, hunting
Weaknesses: Swimming, closed-in and small areas; she needs her space
Regrets: More focused on other things than her friends or her own self sometimes
Fears: Losing another loved one, Dark Forest, water, being closed-in
Desires: To be the best cat she possibly can, towards everything from clan position to friend.
Flaws: Oblivious of her own needs like hunger when stressed, easily stressed, naive, mean when angered, sometimes eating prey on patrols, disobeys orders sometimes and gets in trouble herself, over-curious
Dreams: To be the best warrior she can be
Secrets: Not much, just minor things. She's really loyal, so if she does have one she usually tells someone
To lack of food: trying to cheer her friend's up, and seeming fine with it, but really sighing inside
To lack of sleep: Angry tone, cloudy-minded
To someone finding your darkest secret: confused, angry, nervous
To a storm in the horizon: Cheers inside and watches until it finally comes
To a sudden storm: Gets the clan to safety, but tries to run into it when she can. She loves rain
To a begging friend: Tries best to help, but doesn't spit out an answer right away. She likes to help her friends solve their own problems
To a begging stranger: Helps, tries to be cautious
To the death of a loved one: Silent grieving, but no tears or mercy on the outside
To the death of a stranger: Respectfully grieves
To a starving cat: Catches as much prey as possible and helps, but gives it to them little by little so they don't hurl
To a sick cat: Bring them to the medicine cat
To fall in love: Loyal to clan and to mate, happy mood 24/7
To break up: Sad, a bit angry
To know you'll be a parent: Overjoyed and eager
To the birth of your kit: Curious, excited, nervous, filled with pride
To be asked to take care of kits: Happy, willing, not nervous at all
To be in trouble: Feel idiotic, think about his actions, trying to turn back time
To lying: Not normal at all
To be lied to: Angry, regretting
To see someone being bullied: Step in and stands up for that cat
To find you have a secret admirer: Surprised, happy
To someone confessing their love to you: Surprised, gentle, happy
To be trapped: Angry, confused, cloudy-minded, slightly scared
Self-Perception:
3 nouns to describe self:
*stays in place
*protective
*Windclanner
3 verbs to describe self:
*playing
*hunting
*climbing
3 adjectives to describe self:
*good-natured
*funny
*loyal
Skills:
Communication skills: teasing, playful, funny, friendly
Problem solving skills: Thinks and tries many different things
Leadership skills: Protects clan with life, thinks very carefully, loyal to clan only.
Organization skills: VERY organized. Must make sure everything is in order
Investigation skills: Determined, observant
Learning skills: Quick learner, playful but very carefully listening
Teamwork skills: Funny, cheerful, protective, loyal
FAMILY/RELATIONS/PICTURES:
PARENTS:
- MOM; ROSETAIL:
A beautiful light ginger tabby with green eyes, and slightly darker tabby markings. She has long ears and long claws. Her eyes are quick and deceiving. She is smart, agile, clever, friendly, and open-minded. She is more of a soft cat, but is fierce as well. WindClan queen
- DAD; ONESTAR:
A small, lithe, lean, mottled, light brown tabby tom with amber eyes and a scar behind his ear. Very determined, wise, and fierce. WindClan leader
- SISTER; SPICE:
A small, lean Siamese with blue eyes. She has a dark brown face, paws, and tail, and the rest is cream. Long whiskers, claws, and perfect, silky fur, Spice is a beautiful cat. She is shy, smart, and determined, like her father.
- BROTHER; FLAMETAIL:
A dark ginger tabby with darker tabby markings and amber eyes. He has handsome features with long ears and fangs. He is very loyal, quiet, and caunculating. He prefers to keep quiet most of the time, but is honorable and helpful to his clan and often tries to be the best.
- BROTHER; DEATHFOOT:
A dark brown tabby with black taby stripes. His large eyes are a deep green-brown. He has mottled fur and long whiskers. His muzzle is broad. He is very quiet and calculating. Great watcher and listener and is more of a listener than a talker. He understands things better than others and always has.
- SISTER; DAPPLELEAF (ADOPTED):
Look at Dappleleaf's Profile pic
- SISTER; HONEYLEAF (ADOPTED):
Look at Honeyleaf's profile pic
- SISTER; BIRDFLIGHT(ADOPTED):
Look at Birdie's profile pic
- DAWNKIT:
Slightly more colorful XD It's hard to find a cat with Dawnstorm's colors lol
- DAWNPAW:
Again, slightly altered
- DAWNSTORM:
So this one REALLY needs altering haha XD
SKILLS (Credit to Windystorm)
- Spoiler:
Scruff Grab - Move created by Dawnstorm; when your opponent pounces, pounce back and as you pass reach your claws under the target's neck and pull it up so when you land you pin them down.
Tail Yank - Grab your opponent's tail and yank it with such force your opponent is thrown off balance.
Duck and Twist: Simple defensive move. The cat ducks then twists around, rolling over onto his/her back, and then springs to their paws.
Teeth Grip - Target your opponent's extremities- the legs,
tail, scruff or ears- and sink in your teeth and hold. This move is
similar to the leap-and-hold except your claws remain free to fight.
Upright Lock - Final, crushing move on already weakened
opponent. Rear up on back legs and bring weight down on opponent. If
opponent does the same, wrestle and flip him under you. This makes you
vulnerable to the belly rake, so it takes great strength and speed.
Half-Turn Belly Rake - Turn onto your side, slip under
the opponent's belly, rake it with your claws, then swiftly turn back
onto all fours out from under your opponent.
Badger Defense: Leap over opponent, turn on your back legs and bite opponent's leg. Used only when fighting badgers.
Scruff Shake - Secure a strong teeth grip in the scruff of your
opponents neck; then shake violently until he or she is too rattled to
fight back. Most effective against rats, who are small enough to throw. A
strong throw will stun or kill them.
Partner Fighting - Warriors who have trained and fought
together will often fall instinctively into a defensive position, each
protecting each other's back while fending off an opponent on either
side. Slashing, clawing, and leaping together, battle pairs can be a
whirlwind of danger for attackers.
Play Dead - Effective in a tight situation, such as when
you are pinned. Stop struggling and go limp. When your opponent relaxes
his grip, thinking you are defeated, push yourself up explosively. This
will throw off an unwary opponent and put you in attacking position.
Leap-and-hold - Ideal for a small cat facing a larger opponent.
Spring onto opponent's back and grip with unsheathed claws. Now you are
beyond the range of the opponent's paws and in position to inflict
severe body wounds. A group of apprentices can defeat a large and
dangerous warrior in this way. Watch for the drop-and-roll counter move,
and try to jump free before you get squashed.
Back Kick - Explosive surprise move to catch opponent from
behind. Judge opponent's distance from you carefully, then lash out with
your back legs, taking all weight on your front paws.
Belly Rake - A fight-stopper. Slice with unsheathed
claws against the soft flesh of the opponent's belly. If you're pinned
down, the belly rake quickly puts you back into control.
Front Paw Blow - Frontal attack. Bring your front paw down hard on your opponent's head. Claws sheathed.
Front Paw Strike/Forepaw Slash - Frontal attack. Slice downward with your front paw at the face or body of your opponent.
Killing Bite - A death blow to the back of the neck. Quick and silent and sometimes considered dishonorable. Used only as a last resort
Crouching Leap - Crouch and pounce on your opponent.
Shoulder Drop - This move is preformed by grabbing the opponent's shoulders and then
locking them against the ground. From here, the cat can do anything such
as churning their hind paws against their spine
Roll under - Taught by Dawnstorm. For large opponents. Slide under your enemy and while you slide rake the enemy's belly.
Back Claw Pin: Similar to Belly Rake. When pinned, lift your back feet and come it up under the opponent's belly, and rake. Then while they are surprised, push them away by putting pushing your back legs against their belly. Once they are partially off you, roll to the right and spring to our paws. Ver advanced move taught by DawnStorm.
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Forestblaze - 4
Birdflight - 6
Honeyleaf - 6
Thunderclaw - 7
Windystorm - 4
Dappleleaf - 6
Sunbeam - 3
Rockpetal - 3
Angel Heart - 2
Honeystar - 3
Lightningstorm - 3
Gingerblaze - 4
Viper - 3
Sagedapple - 2
Shamu - 1
Dragonclaw - 1
Snowlily - 3
Lunarlight - 4
Cheesestar - 4
Phantom - 4
N = Despise/enemy
1 = Stranger
2 = Aquaitance
3 = Friendly
4 = Good friend
5 = Best friend
6 = Sibling
7 = Mate
8 = Okay
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Re: DawnStorm~
by Nyx January 15th 2013, 22:52
Uh, actually, I think a lot of people (including me) already have an 'Origins' in their character sheet. 
It's quite nice so far. Lots of information and stuff. But if you used my format as reference, I'd like to have credit please
It's quite nice so far. Lots of information and stuff. But if you used my format as reference, I'd like to have credit please
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Re: DawnStorm~
by Phoenixflare January 15th 2013, 23:06
It's really good Dawnstorm! Keep up the good work!
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Re: DawnStorm~
by Birdstar January 15th 2013, 23:19
Hehehe you little stealer! Like my WindClan banner huh?? :3 Jk jk
Your character sheet is very neat and organized! I love the new banners, the origins, and how you added traits, physical traits, and fighting traits from origins! Its very creative and I'm tempted to do the same with mine!
(Lol I'm too lazy now though XD) Anyway keep it up Dawny! Its looking amazing!
Like my WindClan banner huh?? :3 Jk jkYour character sheet is very neat and organized! I love the new banners, the origins, and how you added traits, physical traits, and fighting traits from origins! Its very creative and I'm tempted to do the same with mine!
(Lol I'm too lazy now though XD) Anyway keep it up Dawny! Its looking amazing!
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Re: DawnStorm~
by Frost January 16th 2013, 05:18
I think your origins doesn't really make much sense... how can a cat be so powerful that she has so many traits of so many Clans? And when you reside in a Clan temporary does not give you the traits or appearances of that particular Clan... And when your parents or ancestors were from other Clans, you can't just have the skills they had. You have to learn them O.o But anyways, good job!
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Re: DawnStorm~
by Ren January 16th 2013, 18:15
Phantom, I mean what I mean is those skills came naturally to DawnStorm. Like, the skills appealed to her more and she had less trouble learning them
And, Birdie, I found that banner on the internet and knew it was yours, already, but that's by I also got the StarClan banner :3 Hehe
Brighty, I don't mean to sound mean, but I didn't use your format as a reference. If anything I should credit Snowlily, because my original format was influenced by hers. If that's not what you mean, I don't really understand what you mean by format
Do you mean like my order of each section? And I was referring in my origins thing the 'Traits received by Origins' thing. I don't think anyone thought about that.
Other than that, Thank you. I will edit it when I can and maybe add a few more things like credits.
And, Birdie, I found that banner on the internet and knew it was yours, already, but that's by I also got the StarClan banner :3 Hehe
Brighty, I don't mean to sound mean, but I didn't use your format as a reference. If anything I should credit Snowlily, because my original format was influenced by hers. If that's not what you mean, I don't really understand what you mean by format
Do you mean like my order of each section? And I was referring in my origins thing the 'Traits received by Origins' thing. I don't think anyone thought about that. Other than that, Thank you. I will edit it when I can and maybe add a few more things like credits.
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Re: DawnStorm~
by Guest January 17th 2013, 16:26
Nice work DawnStorm! I can see you put a lot of work and thought in to this. It's way better than mine! (Mine's not even a proper Create-A-Cat, but whatever ) Some of the battle moves you have that are listed as 'advanced' are pretty basic though, for example the Roll Under. Wouldn't it make sense if the younger, more inexperienced apprentices were taught that so they could have a back-up move against the bigger warriors? ^^
) Some of the battle moves you have that are listed as 'advanced' are pretty basic though, for example the Roll Under. Wouldn't it make sense if the younger, more inexperienced apprentices were taught that so they could have a back-up move against the bigger warriors? ^^
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Re: DawnStorm~
by Frost January 17th 2013, 16:41
DawnStorm wrote:Phantom, I mean what I mean is those skills came naturally to DawnStorm. Like, the skills appealed to her more and she had less trouble learning them
But... What about physical traits? You seem to have every trait of every Clan though.
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Re: DawnStorm~
by Caraway January 17th 2013, 16:54
I agree with Phantom a little, your cat is way too perfect and unrealistic xD
You should add some flaws or at least take away some of the good stuff. No cat is perfect and that is what makes them interesting. Being a descendent from all Clans is kind of.. Strange. The ability to learn skills can't be genetic. It's more about how people (or cats) are raised that determines their unique abilities. Unless she grew up part of every Clan, it's pretty unrealistic.
You have a lot of creative details included here and there are close to no writing errors. You should continue to write and consider some people's suggestions
You should add some flaws or at least take away some of the good stuff. No cat is perfect and that is what makes them interesting. Being a descendent from all Clans is kind of.. Strange. The ability to learn skills can't be genetic. It's more about how people (or cats) are raised that determines their unique abilities. Unless she grew up part of every Clan, it's pretty unrealistic.
You have a lot of creative details included here and there are close to no writing errors. You should continue to write and consider some people's suggestions
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Re: DawnStorm~
by Ren January 25th 2013, 17:14
Done, CheeseStar.
And also I have adopted Gingerlion as my daughter
And also I have adopted Gingerlion as my daughter
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Re: DawnStorm~
by Windystorm February 7th 2013, 16:57
This is cool Dawn. Looks nice, too The only thing that I noticed was this:
6 inch claws would be bigger than her entire paw. It's the size of a 6-inch ruler o_0 3 inch fangs would also stick out of her mouth quite noticeably. Though I'd love a sabertooth cat in WC, it's all a bit much xD The longest realistic claw length would probably be like 2 inches or something when unsheathed. The tail thing is a bit weird since it makes me think that her tail looks like a fan. Also, though you can make your cat look however you'd like, the purple is a little strange. Calling her eyes perfect makes her sound too perfect. (Besides, Breezy has the best eyes.)
Her father being the Onestar from the books would probably make her much, much older than 20 moons, but hey, my dad was a bit of a goofball.
I'd also try to give her a lot more faults. She's pretty much a master warrior, even though she's barely 2 years old.
I appreciate the subtle Windystorm sheet reference things Your character sheet is pretty good overall. It includes some good ideas and text-inspired stuff from some other members' cats. Hope you didn't take offense though. Just helping out :3
The only thing that I noticed was this:Dawnstorm wrote:Description:
A pretty, lean, lithe figure with a colorful pelt. She has a silver-brown pelt with some dusky brown smeared on it, white tipped paws and tail, and a white underbelly. Her face is brown-silver as well. Her tabby markings are dark brown and blend well with her natural fur color. She has a wash of all colors of dawn, including a little, light shade of purple. Her undercoat us thick and her overcoat is thin. Her round, perfect eyes are a light hazel that blend in well through brush and undergrowth. She has 6 inch claws when fully outstretched, and 3 inch fangs. She has a long, round tail that, in leaf-bare, fans out like feathers. Her paws have little fur on them, allowing a quick and quiet pace. Her legs and long and narrow so she can climb easily. Her claws are slightly curved to also enhance running, hunting, and climbing. She has long whiskers that show most of her expression.
6 inch claws would be bigger than her entire paw. It's the size of a 6-inch ruler o_0 3 inch fangs would also stick out of her mouth quite noticeably. Though I'd love a sabertooth cat in WC, it's all a bit much xD The longest realistic claw length would probably be like 2 inches or something when unsheathed. The tail thing is a bit weird since it makes me think that her tail looks like a fan. Also, though you can make your cat look however you'd like, the purple is a little strange. Calling her eyes perfect makes her sound too perfect. (Besides, Breezy has the best eyes.)
Her father being the Onestar from the books would probably make her much, much older than 20 moons, but hey, my dad was a bit of a goofball.
I'd also try to give her a lot more faults. She's pretty much a master warrior, even though she's barely 2 years old.
Dawnstorm wrote: Physical abilities: Running, fighting (surprise attacks) , hunting, stalking, climbing, hanging, use of claws
Physical Description: Muscular, lean, strong legs and jaw, long legs, long tail, small, broad-shouldered
I appreciate the subtle Windystorm sheet reference things
Your character sheet is pretty good overall. It includes some good ideas and text-inspired stuff from some other members' cats. Hope you didn't take offense though. Just helping out :3
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