The Life of The Forbidden Warrior

Prologe
''I'm sorry it will not happen again.'' Said Icestorm. ''Well how do i know it has happen many times before and you have said that your sorry every time time you have done something that you should not be doing.''Said Thislestar." I will figure out your punishment and this time it will not be just a joke.No go to your den and get some rest and stay out of trouble." The next morning. ''Icestorm you have been misbehaving to much and you are causing the Clan great Trouble you are forbidden from the clan!!"


Tell me what you think.

Sounds really good so far!!

THANK YOU THAT IS NICE TO SAY

Chapter 1 Pleeease You got me hooked!!

I will do it later okay

Hm, the title and the prologue seem interesting. But, I think you should fix the grammar and the punctuation a bit-sometimes it'll get difficult to read.

I haven't come on often.

Guess I've been busy.

*must come on more often*

ugh! me too. I never have enough time. the amount of hw i got over labor day holiday/long weekend is ridiculous! sigh...i hate homewoooork!