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Post by Shimmerpaw December 11th 2012, 17:46

Well, I'm wriing this and I need some cats for the Gathering, If you would like to be added to the story Just tell me!

Cats Currently added from the site:
Sparkflame
Moonblaze
Honeystar
Grasswhisker
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Sunfire
WindyStorm
DawnStorm
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POV's:
key:
ThunderClan POV: Darkfire?
WindClan POV: Sparkflame
RiverClan POV: Sunbeam
ShadowClan POV: Sorrelstar?
AwesomeClan POV: OPEN
IceClan POV: Pain??? Or a mystery?
MoonClan: OPEN
Dark Forest: Phantom




Chapter One, What-Mas?:

Chapter 2, Gathering of Christmas:

Chapter 3, Sparkflame Tells Phantom (Phantom POV):

Chapter 4, Christmas Day in WindClan(Sparkflame POV:

Chapter 5, Christmas for RiverClan.:


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Post by Ren December 11th 2012, 17:47

Oooohhh, I like this idea, Spark :3 Some grammar errors, though. Are you making chapter one longer?
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Post by Shimmerpaw December 11th 2012, 17:56

No I don;t think so, I forgot to add I can share this with anyone who would like on Google Docs!
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Post by Auburnflare December 11th 2012, 18:17

I thought Forest died? o_O
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Post by Streamstar December 11th 2012, 19:09

You should add me to the story (for the gathering). I like this so far!
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Post by Sunbeam December 11th 2012, 21:30

I like it! Add more soon! Just a few spelling errors. Besides that, nothing I could see.
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Post by Thin Air December 12th 2012, 03:22

Pretty good. Cool Cat Write more soon!
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Post by Lunarlight December 12th 2012, 11:46

Why didn't you add me? :'(
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Post by Shimmerpaw December 12th 2012, 14:40

@Auburn It says her kits.
@Streamy: Okay!
@Thin: Thank ya!
@Sun: Yay!
@Lunar: the beginning of the story takes place in WindClan.... O.o
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Post by Caraway December 12th 2012, 16:56

Your tone would make you a good author or childrens' books xD Try to use periods more than commas though, because I notice you overuse them in dialogue bits a lot Razz

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Post by Icestar December 12th 2012, 21:55

I wanna be added on your story Very Happy
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Post by Guest December 13th 2012, 16:27

Well this is interesting. XD Can I be in your story?
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Post by Shimmerpaw December 13th 2012, 17:28

Yup! And I'm going to add the leaders and deputies at the Gathering. Falsify if you want to appear then tell me how and where, WindClan WILL be inviting the other Clans to their celebration Wink
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Post by Sunbeam December 13th 2012, 20:14

Could Sunbeam be at the gathering?
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Post by Scarlett December 13th 2012, 20:29

This is a very cute little story
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Post by Frost December 14th 2012, 00:03

Very interesting idea you've got there, Sparkflame. Update quickly!! :DD
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Post by Shimmerpaw December 14th 2012, 15:56

I will! Sure Sunny!
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Post by Roguestar December 14th 2012, 16:04

Rockpetal is a former kittypet! She knows what Christmas is like! Anywho, good story! I am highly enjoying it. Thumbs Up 2
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Post by Shimmerpaw December 14th 2012, 16:57

Maybe Sparkflame will ask her!
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Post by Lunarlight December 14th 2012, 17:17

Please add me!
Anyways, I really love that the chapters aren't to long to read, like many fanfics are.
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Post by Shimmerpaw December 14th 2012, 17:53

UH, Lunar, where and when would you like to come into the story? And thank you for the complimants! Really Cheese? A chidrens writer! I never thought of becoming an author! XD
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Post by Sunbeam December 15th 2012, 08:30

Ilike it! Only one thing: You said Monkeystar of RiverClan. Razz
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Post by Birdstar December 15th 2012, 12:13

Sparky can I be in the story? :3 I could come in the story cuz I'm in WindClan and all Razz
Anyway, I love it so far Sparky!! Can't wait until Chapter 3 Very Happy Ecstatic
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Post by Legendflower December 15th 2012, 13:14

MonkeyStar leads ThunderClan not RiverClan... Razz
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Post by Nyx December 15th 2012, 13:21

Pfft, how dare you mix me and Monkeystar up Spark. D:< Lol jk, but can you change it? Razz Proofreading your work will always help. ^-^ Nice writing and keep it up!
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