Skyclan RPG (v.2.0)

First topic message reminder :

Hey! This is Phoenixflare. Since the old Skyclan rpg was inactive, I decided to make a new one! ^.^ Any WCF member can join!

Rules:

• No godmodding

• Make it realistic. Don't have your cat just kill a badger, a dog or a fox single-handed. Nobody can do that, except for Lionblaze

• No spamming, so no really short posts, like

  Badgerfang went and hunted and came back to camp

• Please have fun!

Skyclan cats, preferably keep your own characters!

Everyone, I'll add you to the list once you're accepted!

Code:

[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Description (picture is optional):[/b]
[b]Personality:[/b]
[b]Rank:[/b]
[b]Mate:[/b]
[b]Kits:[/b]
[b]Other:[/b]

Allegiances:

Mine:

Name: Phoenixflare
Age: 19 moons
Description (picture is optional):

Spoiler:

Personality: Friendly, swift, compassionate, stubborn, witty, clever
Mate: Bramblesky
Kits: Brackenkit, Blackkit, Falconkit, and Dreamkit
Other: N/A

"Ok...." Lunarpaw meowed. She trusted her mentor, she was just really nervous. She crouched and leaped with all her might, hoping that she wouldn't mess this up.

Sunpath leaped from boulder to boulder. She was practicing jumping. In the distance she spotted Bramblesky training his apprentice, Lunarpaw and Phoenixflare standing next to them. Sunpath dashed over excited to see what they were doing. She saw that they were practicing climbing trees. "Good job, Lunarpaw!" she praised.

"Hah?" Lunarpaw turned to see who just spoke/meowed, and her claws started to slide downward on the tree. "AIEE!" Lunarpaw yowled.

Sunpath rushed forward and reached up with her head and let Lunarpaw slide on her head. "Sorry, Lunarpaw!" she apologized.

Bramblesky grabbed the apprentice and pulled her up.
"There," Bramblesky breathed hard. He helped her get onto the branch.
"Sunpath! Don't go bounding over like a rabbit and chirp like a bird! OK? She almost fell," Bramblesky scolded.

"Sorry," she whispered, embarrassed to be scolded by another warrior, though he was a senior warrior, and she slide down the tree letting Lunarpaw hang again. She slinked away back to her practicing.

"It's okay Sunpath," Lunarpaw mewed still terrified of the fact she almost fell, "it's my fault I can't climb a stupid tree." She lost focus and a warrior, someone on a higher priority than her, got in trouble.

"Lunarpaw, not all apprentices can climb trees on the first try," Bramblesky commented, touching the apprentice on the cheek with his nose.
"And Sunpath, don't feel bad, it was just a mistake," Bramblesky meowed to the she-cat.
"It's ok. I am sorry for scolding you," Bramblesky added in.

~"She" is a secret character from Lunarpaw's past....She is unknown for now.....~

Lunarpaw stayed quiet. As much as Bramblesky would encourage her...."She" told her it was impossible to climb a tree, no matter how hard she tried.

Bramblesky glanced at her.
"You'll be the best warrior,' Bramblesky meowed.
"Now for the hard part, getting down." Bramblesky glanced at his apprentice.
"What do you think are the two things you need for getting down?"

"Uhm...." Lunarpaw thought for a second, "Balance and...Courage?" She had no idea what to say.

Bramblesky nodded slightly.
"Always need Balance and courage, but the two I was looking for was Swiftness and timing."
"Here's a demo," Bramblesky looked down.
"Say I am running in a race, I don't care about my timing. What do you think would happen?" Bramblesky asked.
"When you give me a guess I will show you what would happen."

"Then you don't know when or how to jump, and when you do, you'll fall on your face?" Lunarpaw guessed.

"Sort of, its very dangerous if you time your jump wrong, watch closely at my paws and movements," Bramblesky ordered. He started to run to the other tree. He looked at the ground and leaped. His head swished around as he saw that the part he wanted to land in was farther behind. Bramblesky reached out with his paws but he missed and hit the ground face first. He stumbled and skidded on his back. Rising to his paws he looked up at Lunarpaw who was really far away.
"My spot I wanted to land was," Bramblesky quickly bounded over to his spot which was about 16 fox-lengths away," here." He pointed with his tail. He looked at where he hit the ground. The grass was rubbed off and the dirt was scattered everywhere. Where his head hit was a small dent in the ground.

Sorry guys, RPGs can't be a one-on-one back and forth type. Unless someone else posts/joins, this RP is good as gone if there's only two people :/ RPG rules are currently being written, so hopefully it'll clarify some more stuff since I explain things terribly.

~Oh sorry Uhm, sorry bout' that! I'll wait till' someone else joins in ~

~...OOooooooops~

Phoenixflare padded over to Lunarpaw and Bramblesky. "How's the training going?" she asked. She glanced at Bramblesky. "And why do you have dirt all over your face?" she glanced around and saw a cat-sized face dent in the ground. "Ohhh... showing Lunarpaw what happens when you don't time?" She nodded at Lunarpaw. "Exactly what happens. You squish your face into a flat pancake. You don't want that to happen. Timing is very important to us. Bad timing, BAM! You're out."

"Two things, What the heck is a pancake and two, please move so I don't hit you on my way down," meowed Lunarpaw from the branch.

Bramblesky shrugged.
"I did that faceplant on my first time," Bramblesky giggled.
"A pancake is a two leg food,"Bramblesky meowed. He sat down to watch his apprentice.

"Okey...." Lunarpaw took a deep breath and leaped off the tree, and landed on her paws. "THANK STARCLAN!" she yowled.

Bramblesky smiled. His eyes gleamed with happiness,
"Amazing landing!" Bramblesky yowled. He took a ginormous leap and went flying from his branch. His paws landed steadily and he halted beside Lunarpaw.

Is this still open?

No, I'm afraid not. This is a really old RPG and the creator is banned. I think we should lock this.

Ok, thanks anyway.