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Post by Nyx January 18th 2013, 18:51

I know I still have my autobiography story to write but this idea was so interesting I couldn't resist writing a bit. It would be much appreciated if anyone could contribute some title ideas! Very Happy




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Prologue: I am Gray:


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Post by Ren January 18th 2013, 19:22

Hmmm.... this is interesting so far. I'll have to do a warriors story myself sometime. I was planning on doing it soon. I need a plot myself. Write more soon!
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Post by Birdstar January 18th 2013, 21:37

This is really cool Brighty, I like it! Smile Its very interesting, the first chapter gets you hooked onto the story really! It seems like a kind of... depressing character too Razz I'm interested to see where this fanfic will go so please write more! ^.^ Great job so far Brighty!
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Post by Frost January 18th 2013, 21:53

Pearldust is a lovely name. Not bad for a start, keep writing!
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Post by Phoenixflare January 18th 2013, 23:00

Pearldust and Scorchstorm are wonderful names! You are so descriptive! It's great so far! Keep up the good work! Razz
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Post by Nyx January 19th 2013, 10:57

Thanks for the support guys! :3 Chapter 1 will most likely come out today or tomorrow, and I'll get some major writing done on Monday since I have the day off from school.

Any ideas for a title, just based on the prologue?
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Post by Caraway January 19th 2013, 11:50

I liked the prologue Very Happy No typos and great descriptions. Pearldust reminds me of Hazeldust ;_;

For titles, how about:
Fire, Ice and Shadow
Silver Secrets

Okay I am pretty bad at titles ><
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Post by Ren January 19th 2013, 12:45

THE 50 SHADES OF GRAY!!!!! Lol, just kidding, just kidding XD You should call it the Book of the Gray or Gray Ice? I don't know? Gray Fire? Very Happy Lol I'm okay at names but this one is hard. Keep up the work!!!!
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Post by Nyx January 19th 2013, 12:48

Maybe finding a title will be easier after a couple more chapters. Razz Cause then there's a clearer plot.

Hey Chez, maybe you could make a cover for this. Very Happy After you're done with all your other requests of course xD


DS, that book is fragging creepy e_e I hardly read past three chapters when I was like, okay, nevermind, never reading this again. But would Between Shades of Gray be a better title?
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Post by Ren January 19th 2013, 12:52

IKR! That book has a lot of... um, older stuff in it. My sis is 17 and she can't read it. I just read my mom's bit sneakily Brightstar's Untitled Fanfic 4182798912 Anyway, yeah, but it probably would sound like 50 Shades of Gray. Maybe like... Between Gray Ice or Between Ice and Fire?
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Post by Nyx January 19th 2013, 15:48

I'm going to go ahead with the 'Between Shades of Gray' idea for now, because it kind of fits the plot I'm thinking about.

I made a cover (could be temporary, could be permanent), and I hope you don't mind I used that photo Phanny. Sweat I just thought it was perfect because Gray is black-furred, and she spoke of 'looking at her reflection.'
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Post by Frost January 19th 2013, 20:33

Lol Bright, you stole my pic xD but I think the name seems pretty okay.
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Post by Nyx January 19th 2013, 21:46

Yeah I said in that post up there. Razz Hope you don't mind.

I think the title fits the story, but if I come across a better one I'll change it. It just depends on how the plotline goes as I write. Usually I don't plan my stories before I write, so I never know what'll happen.


D'you guys think it'd be a good idea after every chapter I could ask everyone to contribute on how they want the story to go on from there? It would be fun I think, to let everyone participate a little and it would also help me keep continuing the fanfic.
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Post by Frost January 19th 2013, 21:52

I don't mind Very Happy since I stole it from another person HAHAHA.

Well, I have no idea how I would continue the story. Maybe something tragic happens. Would it be a happy or a sad ending?
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Post by Phoenixflare January 19th 2013, 23:06

Every book I read has a happy ending. Maybe this time it could have something not super bad but kinda bad happen? I don't know. It's your choice since you're the authour.
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