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Post by Shimmerpaw November 25th 2012, 19:07

This is my KIt Challenge Entry, so, Enjoy!

Day one:

My mother was howling with pain, and my father walked in. The medicine cat was hovering by the end of my mother’s body. Then, I emerged. When the medicine cat nipped my sack, I gasped in my first breath of fresh air through my own lungs. I squeaked weakly and continued breathing. Everything was dark. Someone picked me up by my scruff and I squeaked in protest No! Put me down! I heard someone talking when I stopped thinking. The words were greatly muffled but I heard. “This kit will be a great warrior, we should name him Fuzzkit, He;s so fuzzy!” Warrior? What;s that? I want to be a warrior! I thought and I searched my mother’s tummy for a place to suckle, when I found it I suckled and fell into a milk induced slumber.
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Post by Frost November 25th 2012, 20:05

I find this really amusing Razz Nice job! I suppose we can comment on these entries like fanfiction?
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Post by Caraway November 25th 2012, 20:14

Fuzzkit sounds so cute! it's very descriptive Very Happy

and yeah, I guess you just comment on them like fanfiction ^^
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Post by Sunbeam November 27th 2012, 03:04

I like it! Very good amount of detail! Write more soon!
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Post by Shimmerpaw November 27th 2012, 17:15

Thanks Sunbeam Cheesey and Phanny! Here;s some more! Very Happy

Day two:

The second day, the day after I was born, I woke up. I woke up and I didn’t open my eyes. I heard a conversation going on and I grabbed all the words this time, the weren’t as fuzzy. “Why hasn’t he opened his eyes yet?” I heard someone say, automaticly i recognized my mother’cs voice. “He’s only been alive for a day.” she told the other voice. I sat up and imeadiely shot back to he floor. My legs felt... wobbly. What do they mean, “Opned my eyes yet?” I wondered. I hadn’t had my hand a talkng yet, but that sounded like the most wonderfullest thing ever! “Well, I’m sure he’ll be catching plenty of prey for you when he’s older.” the other voice said, then I heard the nest rustle. I turned my head back and forth and then I heard hunt I want to hunt! I thought, Then I walked over to my mither “MAMA! I’m hungry!” I mewed for the first time. I suckled and then fell back into, ince again, a mik indused sleep.

Day Three:

This morning I woke up and imeaditly opened my eyes.They were beautiful and blue, I asked my mother if I could go outside and she said “First, my name is Sproutflower.” she said. i nodded and walked outside of the den. A cat wakled over “Hi =, Fuzzkit! I’m Beampaw, wanna play?” she asked. Beampaw was pretty, I loved her green eyes and lovley orange and sleek pelt. “Sure!” I mewed. She hopped onto meand said “Now you make a move!” I did, I unsheathed my tiny claws and swiped them on her side “Ouch!” she mewed and hopped off me “Nice one Kit!” I beamed and hopped onto her back. “Roar!” I yowled and she tried to shake me off, but I hung on lik my life depended on it. After our play fight, we played moss-ball. Once the game was over I suckled really quick and fell asleep.
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