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Post by Pinewhisker April 20th 2013, 09:03

Pinewhisker
She-cat " 4 years
Favorite Warriors are Hollyleaf, Frostfur, Lionheart, Gorsepaw, Fireheart, Mousefur
Description ; Pinewhisker looks like a shadow, a furry one at that. Her fur is heavy, thick, and long with a dry, straw-like texture. It is colored smokey black. Her muzzle, chest, belly, and paws are all pitch black. She is a heavy-set cat with thick legs and broad shoulders. Her tail is short and stiff, covered in draping fur. Her paws are square and large. She has almond eyes, round and dark amber.
Personality ; Pinewhisker is a serious cat. She hates goofing off and jokes. She enjoys the quiet, but too much will drive her crazy. It annoys her greatly when things are uncomfortable, stuffy, or crammed. Her favorite past time is sun-soaking. She has a strange like for fish eggs. Most cats would think of her as grumpy or gruff.
Special Traits ; One particular thing Pinewhisker is good at is stealing bird eggs. Somehow, she can sneak into the reeds and take their eggs, enduring the pecks and perhaps making a meal out of the birds.
Weakness ; Pinewhisker has two main weaknesses. One is that she cannot fit though many tight spaces. Her stocky build does not allow that. The second is that she is not a very good swimmer. She can paddle and keep her head, and enjoys doing it, but cannot swim as strongly as others.
Family ; Pinewhisker's family was rather large. Her parents, ____ and ____, had eight kittens. Five of those kittens never made it too the next day. The others just seemed to wither away before their fifth moon, except Pinekit, of course, and her brother Sprucekit. Unfortunately, when they were nine moons old, they went into battle and Sprucepaw lost his life, leaving Pinepaw alone with her mother. Her father had died of greencough back when she was a kitten.


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Post by Caraway April 20th 2013, 16:44

It has a really consistent theme and flow to it Very Happy I can tell you didn't just write and post this in the spot. There are so many details and quirks that I enjoy, like the bird stuff and fish eggs. There's a little [/b] left over at the very end, but that's about it. Draw stuff and add more soon Super Happy
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Post by Pinewhisker April 20th 2013, 19:10

Thanks, Cheesestar! I'm glad you like so many things about it~
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Post by Shimmerpaw April 21st 2013, 05:39

This is cool Very Happy I like the ideas, The bird eggs thing was cool. I like the appearance too... furry shadow.

I can't put my finger on who you were before you changed your name Razz
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Post by Pinewhisker April 21st 2013, 05:51

Thanks for the feedback, Feye!
I was Sorrelstar.
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Post by Shimmerpaw April 21st 2013, 12:56

YES!! I knew you were either Sorrelstar or Skittlestar... But I REALLY like your character sheet.
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Post by Pinewhisker April 21st 2013, 17:19

Haha. Where is Skittlestar? ;-;
Thanks so much, again.
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Post by Illusion April 21st 2013, 23:24

Very nice, so far! Maybe add some history, and either cat photos or the *ahem* wonderful pictures you draw? (I seriously can't believe you can draw like that on computer!)
Luv it!
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Post by Pinewhisker April 23rd 2013, 16:01

Thanks!
I don't know. She doesn't really have an eventful history. Just normal cat stuff.
Oh, maybe~ Thanks.
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Post by Scarlett April 23rd 2013, 16:04

Skittle star left a long time ago now. Anyway I agree that more could be added but that is up to you. I would like to see more pictures. Shame you left shadowclan.
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