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Post by Bloodpaw February 15th 2013, 12:45

Cat Name: Bloodpaw

Gender: she-cat

Age: 6 moons

Clan: ShadowClan

Mate: none

Kits: none

Parents:

Littermates:

Strengths: can fit in small places, walks very quietly, learns quickly, intelligent

Weaknesses: gets angry quickly, doesn't like water or wide-open places, senstitve to bright light, her pelt makes it hard to hide in the shadows, not very strong, hates getting dirty

Appearance: small fluffy white cat with blood-red eyes, very sharp pointy teeth

Personality: very vain, cruel, sadistic , easily amused, lazy, would prefer to trick others into doing work for her, narcissistic, acts superior, intelligent

History: ~I dont know yet, i shall think about it...~


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Post by Scarlett February 15th 2013, 12:54

It looks pretty good so far. You might want to adjust the order of some things though to make it look a bit more organized. It would make it easier to read too if you had the smaller bit of your information at the top (like the name, age, clan, etc.) and the more detailed things at the bottom (like the appearance, history and family information. And since you have so many pictures it may also be a good idea to put the family information in a spoiler since it contains so many pictures in it. Otherwise great start
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Post by Bloodpaw February 15th 2013, 12:56

hmmm thanks for the ideas! they might make itmeasier, true
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Post by Phoenixflare February 15th 2013, 13:25

That's actually pretty good! I like it. Smile
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Post by Scarlett February 15th 2013, 13:29

Name
Age
Clan
Mate
Kits
Parents
Littermates
Appearance
Personality
History

To answer your question from chat. It might be easier to follow the flow if you ordered it similar to this. Hope this helps.
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Post by Bloodpaw February 15th 2013, 13:30

ohhhh ok! Thanks snowlily!
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Post by Scarlett February 15th 2013, 13:33

No problem dea. Hopefully it makes more sense now
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Post by Bloodpaw February 15th 2013, 13:33

It seems easier to read, I think. Very Happy
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Post by Scarlett February 15th 2013, 13:35

I might just move the appearance and personality to just above the history now. Otherwise it is much better
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Post by Bloodpaw February 15th 2013, 13:39

Cooooool, *sob* im all alone, my family died........... but yep! hey this history seems eerily familair...
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