BrokenPaw The Maine Coon
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BrokenPaw The Maine Coon
by BrokenClaw January 27th 2013, 14:52
BrokenPaw
She-cat
Favorite Cats: Fireheart,YellowFang.
Different shades of bay along her coat,she houses many black tiger stripes along her pelt. Her eyes are a yellow-green color. She has a very distinct scar on her right forearm that goes from shoulder to claws. Because of this,she is never able to use her claws in that forearm.
Quite protective over her comrades,she rarely ever speaks about personal problems. She will never tell anyone about her history,or where she originated.
A really skilled hunter. Her element is of the dawn and dusk. She also is a great swimmer,and that is a secret to her only.
Her eyes are very weak to the daylight,being raised in an almost eternal twilight caused her eyesight to be rather poor. She is also a rather weak fighter when it comes to smarts,and is also the follower.
She doesn't know much about her family. The only memory she ever had of a family was flames and scattering cats. This memory haunts her till this very day,and often times reflects on others her hatred.
She was said to be from RiverClan,housing the scents of one of their queens. Although,the clan denies ever having a queen with her kind of pelt,or even a set of kits around her age. RiverClan did accept her until she was fit to fight for herself,and was a wanderer until she came across SkyClan. She now wishes to live a new life with this clan,and be a more stronger warrior of the trees.
POSING TIME
AS A KIT <3
PERFECT PORTRAIT
Last edited by BrokenClaw on February 24th 2013, 23:29; edited 2 times in total
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Re: BrokenPaw The Maine Coon
by Hazelstar January 27th 2013, 15:00
Hello Brok! (My nickname for you!) Welcome to WCF! You sound like a great cat, though I recommend adding more detail to your history! I'm Hazelstar, the recently made leader of SkyClan, mate of Eaglestrike!
If you haven't already, read the rules! No, memorize the rules! ;D
Feel free to join any clan! You'd be welcomed in anyone!
If you haven't already, read the rules! No, memorize the rules! ;D
Feel free to join any clan! You'd be welcomed in anyone!
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Re: BrokenPaw The Maine Coon
by BrokenClaw January 27th 2013, 15:01
xD thanks! And I know,not very creative today but,will fix eventually! Tell your hubby I said "Watch out" xD jk
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Re: BrokenPaw The Maine Coon
by Nyx January 27th 2013, 15:04
Wlelcome to WCF Brok! (Can I call you that too? 
) I'm Brightstar, leader of RiverClan and WCF Reviewer! Hazelnut already reminded you about the site rules, so I won't repeat. However, if you have any questions, visit the FAQ, by clicking here, or visit the Help Section in general, by clicking here.
Come join us in the Chatbox sometime! Hope to see you around!
) I'm Brightstar, leader of RiverClan and WCF Reviewer! Hazelnut already reminded you about the site rules, so I won't repeat. However, if you have any questions, visit the FAQ, by clicking here, or visit the Help Section in general, by clicking here. Come join us in the Chatbox sometime! Hope to see you around!
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Re: BrokenPaw The Maine Coon
by Phoenixflare January 27th 2013, 15:07
Welcome Brok! I'm Blazespirit, a warrior who recently joined Skyclan and mate of Bramblesky! I hope you have fun here!
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Re: BrokenPaw The Maine Coon
by BrokenClaw January 27th 2013, 15:09
Thank you thank you! C: can't wait to join a clan!
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Re: BrokenPaw The Maine Coon
by Caraway January 27th 2013, 15:25
Helloo 
I'm CheeseStar. Everything important has already been said, so I'll just skip to the last part of my greeting where I talk about our awesomeness.
You're already on chat, so join some RPGs You seem like a good role player, as long as your characters have some variety.
I'm CheeseStar. Everything important has already been said, so I'll just skip to the last part of my greeting where I talk about our awesomeness. You're already on chat, so join some RPGs
You seem like a good role player, as long as your characters have some variety.
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Re: BrokenPaw The Maine Coon
by BrokenClaw January 27th 2013, 15:48
xD thanks! I wouldn't mind to join some roleplays either!
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Re: BrokenPaw The Maine Coon
by Russetstar February 4th 2013, 16:39
Maine Coons are the boss! Anyways, your cat seems very interresting, I hope we get to roleplay sometime!!! 
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Re: BrokenPaw The Maine Coon
by Ren February 4th 2013, 17:56
I'm too lazy to see if I already commented, but I'll just do my review again if I did XD
I think this for a start. You should space out your character sheet elements, though. Also remember not to capitalize the suffix of the warrior name (EX. FeatherWing). I made the same mistake, so no worries
And also perhaps you could add a bit more to your description, like a bit more on her pelt and eyes perhaps. Although it wouldn't hurt if you added a bit of minor detail, like if her claws are long/not long, etc.
You should also add more weaknesses and special skills. Anyway, it's a good start, so write more soon
I think this for a start. You should space out your character sheet elements, though. Also remember not to capitalize the suffix of the warrior name (EX. FeatherWing). I made the same mistake, so no worries
And also perhaps you could add a bit more to your description, like a bit more on her pelt and eyes perhaps. Although it wouldn't hurt if you added a bit of minor detail, like if her claws are long/not long, etc. You should also add more weaknesses and special skills. Anyway, it's a good start, so write more soon
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Re: BrokenPaw The Maine Coon
by BrokenClaw February 24th 2013, 23:33
Thanks all! And thanks dawn <3 it's a habit to do that for me xD. But,updated the bio with some more pics,made it neater. Yay~
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