Icetalon
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Icetalon
by Icetalon January 22nd 2013, 18:29
Cat Name: Icetalon
Gender: Female
Age: 1 & 1/2
Favorite Warriors Characters: I like Bluestar, because her personality matches mine x)
Appearance: she's a brown bengal with black stripes on her body & face. She also have bright green eyes
Personality: She's though & strong with a sassy attitude
Special Traits: er, she has interesting comebacks
Weaknesses: she's a little too shy to make many friends
Family: none~
History/Origins: She was found as a kit wondering around the border (idk xP)
Gender: Female
Age: 1 & 1/2
Favorite Warriors Characters: I like Bluestar, because her personality matches mine x)
Appearance: she's a brown bengal with black stripes on her body & face. She also have bright green eyes
Personality: She's though & strong with a sassy attitude
Special Traits: er, she has interesting comebacks
Weaknesses: she's a little too shy to make many friends
Family: none~
History/Origins: She was found as a kit wondering around the border (idk xP)
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Re: Icetalon
by Gingerlion January 22nd 2013, 18:32
Hi are you new!? I'm Gingerpaw/Gingerlion! Add a little more to your history :-)
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Re: Icetalon
by Caraway January 22nd 2013, 19:16
It has the basics. I'd change your age units to moons rather than years(?). Your history is how you got to the Clans, if you were a kittypet before, part of another Clan before, etc.
There are some grammar and spelling mistakes, but reading it over can fix that. Add some family stuff and pictures of your cat
There are some grammar and spelling mistakes, but reading it over can fix that. Add some family stuff and pictures of your cat
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Re: Icetalon
by Icetalon January 22nd 2013, 19:44
How could I add any family if i don't know any of the other clan cats?
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Re: Icetalon
by Phoenixflare January 22nd 2013, 20:53
Hey Icetalon! Welcome to WCF! You need to extend your history otherwise it's great! Have fun! 
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Re: Icetalon
by Ren January 22nd 2013, 21:01
You should add a bit more to it. Make up a family, use some creativity! You got the ball rolling! :DD
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