Wavrenclaw

Cat Name: Wavrenclaw
Gender: Tom
Age: 25 moons
Favorite Warriors Characters: (Bluestar, Hollyleaf, Briarlight, Leafpool, Tawnypelt, Mydstyfoot Brambleclaw, Thronclaw, Tallstar, Onestar)
Appearance: Brown tabby tom with green eyes and a white mouth.
Personality: Random, sometimes sarcastic, but generally good nature. Can be grumpy at times.
Special Traits: Wavrenclaw is good at apprentice duties and will usually volunteer to do them if there are no apprentices. He's a somewhat good fighter when the situation calls for it, but does not like fighting. He's also got a good ability for helping medicen cats prepare herbs (Striping herbs, carrying them to camp, mixing poultices), but is extreamly poor at treating patience and his memory of which herb does what is extreamly poor.
Weaknesses: He is a poor hunter, catching maybe two pieces of prey in optimal weather conditions. He can be very impatient when hunting, so he is not a desirable member of a hunting patrol when prey is scarce. He also is very shy about taking leadership and would rather avoid taking leadership in any role, from a patrol leader to clan leader and deputy. He can sometimes turn off clanmates due to his personality.
Family: None.
History/Origins: Wavrenclaw was at one point a rouge named Wavren. Wavren was born to Two tabbies, and was originally a kittypet, until his house burned down, which he became wild. Not long after, he heard about the clans and set to train himself, not wanting to seem like a curious young tom interested in the clans. He spent sometime with a small band of cats, one that knew herbs well, and tough Wavren how to properly strip herbs and mix poultices, although Wavren could not remember any healing properties of herbs, He did manage to identify yew berries well after accidentally swallowing one. However, these cats soon dispersed in a small city, becoming kittypets, and Wavren soon renamed himself Wavrenclaw. Wavrenclaw now resides in Skyclan.

(I hope that was ok, I wanted to give Wavrenclaw a fair amount of strengths and weaknesses and an interesting backstory.)

Lol okay so I will start by saying that your history sounds eerily familiar to what I made Snowlily's original backstory. I really like it but under special traits you put "patience". We're you meaning to put "patients"?

It looks good so far. Now you just need a clan and maybe a picture of your character?

Wow, this is really detailed and covers almost everything Great job!

Just some spelling errors and general flow of sentences. Try not to repeat details, although without proof reading, it's hard to do. "Extreamly" is spelled "extremely" In your description, "white mouth" is probably better off as "white muzzle", unless his mouth really is white xD

I liked your history. It's not uncommon to have similar histories, since many cats were not Clan-both and ventured into the Clans after a traumatic accident ^-^ That's in mine, too.
I'd love to see more of the group of cats you travelled with You should make a section on them with pictures and all. Give the group a cool name, too

Hey Wavrenclaw! That's really good so far! That history's got me interested. I hope we can be friends!

NEW INFO: Wavrenclaw jpined skyclan.

PS: I appreciate everyone who has posted and gave an opinion and or suggestion.

I like the detail. But you should focus on the structure on there and maybe add a bit more. Like... space it out, color-code it, center it.... you know. And perhaps a bit more to your history would be nice, or perhaps a small banner of SkyClan or ?

Otherwise it is good for now Write more soon, and hope to see Wavernclaw RPing soon!!! :DD