Firestorm

by **Sunbeam** December 9th 2012, 22:10

My Second Roleplay Character:

Name: Firestorm

Gender: Tom

Strengths: His strongest trait is stealth, though he is also fast.

Weaknesses: He is not very good at swimming or fighting.

Age:30 moons

Appearance: A small black tom with glinting amber eyes and a scared muzzle and flank. He has some lighter gray stripes on his flanks.

Personality: A cat not to be trifled with, he doesn't forget grudges easily and is always ready for for a fight.

History: He is 100% Riverclan, and because both of his patents were killed by dogs, he hates all dogs, big or small.

by **Scarlett** December 9th 2012, 22:57

Is this your second character? Anyway it's good but you might try expanding the history of this character a bit. It makes them a lot more interesting in the rps when a character has a history tied into a clan, certain other characters or just an overall place. It makes the character a lot more relatable and it becomes much easier to really start involving yourself in rps in different ways. A bit more of a description added to the personality might help others (or maybe it's just me) get a better idea of who Sunbeam is as a character too.

by **Sunbeam** December 9th 2012, 23:00

I only just made this topic, as you can see. I'll add more soon. Smile

by **Sunbeam** December 16th 2012, 02:47

Hey guys, sorry, but I'm deleting this character. I might re-add him later.

by Ren December 16th 2012, 08:29

Awww

I love this characters bio and such. And also, I need his bio for the story I told you about, so can you keep him up a little longer?

by **Sunbeam** December 17th 2012, 02:10

Okay, I'll keep this character for a while.

by Ren December 17th 2012, 07:45

YAY!!!!! ^^^^ I'll add you in the story EXTRA for that!!!!

by **Sunbeam** December 17th 2012, 07:56

Thanks!

I "liked" your post!

by Ren December 17th 2012, 08:00

Yay!!!!!!! Haaha, I'm glad. Please neverrrrr delete Firestorm! You can just have 3 RP characters! I have Hawkleaf, Seartalon, Nyx, and Dawnstorm Smile