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Bramblethorn
by Bramblethorn November 11th 2012, 01:26
Name: Bramblethorn
Gender: Tom
Age: 28 moons
Appearance: Bramblethorn is a huge tom with broad shoulders and a muscular build. He has deep, intense dark green eyes, a white muzzle with a small stripe that stops in between his eyes, and a white tail tip. He has jet black tabby stripes and somewhat short whiskers and giant paws that aren't perfect for stealth. He's a short haired tom with sleek dark brown tabby fur extrememly sharp claws. His ears are triangular and he is physically strong and capable in many things that he does.
Personality: Outside of battle Bramblethorn is very mysterious and quiet and tends to keep to himself. He is very protective and speaks only when necessary yet even though he seems so quiet he is very confident and strong in his beliefs and how he see's himself. He loves his friends, family, and Clan more than anything and simply loves life. In battle its like hes morphed into a completely different cat. He's bossy, sharp-tounged, a natural leader, fierce and a little too confident. Bramblethorn also tends to be over dramatic about situations yet its always for the good of his clan. He can be sweet and heroic and is extremely protective of Birdflight his only sister. Overall he is a bold, heroic, and lionhearted tom.
Special Traits: His best trait is definitely fighting. Its comes so easily and naturally for him because of his long claws and brute strength. He is incredibly powerful and before a battle he sharpens his claws on rocks so their even longer and sharper. He does vigorous training everyday to make sure he's in perfect shape and that he builds up his muscles as well.
Weaknesses: He is terrible at stealth and hunting. His large paws always seemed to break a twig and he's not the fastest tom you have ever seen. He's fast enough to catch at least something but he wouldn't be in the category of best hunters.
Well-Known Kin: Bramblestar, Hawkfrost, Squirrelflight, Tawnypelt, Tigerstar, Onestar, Firestar, Leafpool, Crowfeather, Goldenflower, Flametail, Dawnpelt, Tigerheart, etc.
History:
Ok if you want a way better history see Birdflight's lol
Kit:
Bramblekit was born in a badger den in the middle of a battle along with Birdkit and Hawk-kit. His mother was murdered by the enemy so the three kits were raised by Leafwhisper's best friend, Runningstream. Sparrowtalon, his father, was very involved in raising his kits and was a great father.
Apprentice:
Bramblepaw was part of a small group that called themselves the Tunnelers. There were 4 cats, himself, Blackpaw, Boulderpaw, and Petalpaw. The 4 cats had a secret hideout in a tunnel where Bramblepaw was leader with his deputy Petalpaw. There in the tunnels they trained and explored, becoming some of the best fighters in the clan. The 4 stayed best friends and helped out each other no matter what and they each promised to keep it a secret. When Hawkpaw died in battle Bramblepaw was shocked and horrified and made it his job to protect Birdpaw no matter what.
Warrior:
Even though The Tunnelers stopped meeting everyday, they met every moon in the morning before dawn patrol. Bramblethorn protects his sister even though she insists that she doesn't need protecting. He also proves that he can become the best fighter and sharpens his claws on rocks to prove his strength.
Family:
I'll do this later too
Bramblethorn
Kit:
Gender: Tom
Age: 28 moons
Appearance: Bramblethorn is a huge tom with broad shoulders and a muscular build. He has deep, intense dark green eyes, a white muzzle with a small stripe that stops in between his eyes, and a white tail tip. He has jet black tabby stripes and somewhat short whiskers and giant paws that aren't perfect for stealth. He's a short haired tom with sleek dark brown tabby fur extrememly sharp claws. His ears are triangular and he is physically strong and capable in many things that he does.
Personality: Outside of battle Bramblethorn is very mysterious and quiet and tends to keep to himself. He is very protective and speaks only when necessary yet even though he seems so quiet he is very confident and strong in his beliefs and how he see's himself. He loves his friends, family, and Clan more than anything and simply loves life. In battle its like hes morphed into a completely different cat. He's bossy, sharp-tounged, a natural leader, fierce and a little too confident. Bramblethorn also tends to be over dramatic about situations yet its always for the good of his clan. He can be sweet and heroic and is extremely protective of Birdflight his only sister. Overall he is a bold, heroic, and lionhearted tom.
Special Traits: His best trait is definitely fighting. Its comes so easily and naturally for him because of his long claws and brute strength. He is incredibly powerful and before a battle he sharpens his claws on rocks so their even longer and sharper. He does vigorous training everyday to make sure he's in perfect shape and that he builds up his muscles as well.
Weaknesses: He is terrible at stealth and hunting. His large paws always seemed to break a twig and he's not the fastest tom you have ever seen. He's fast enough to catch at least something but he wouldn't be in the category of best hunters.
Well-Known Kin: Bramblestar, Hawkfrost, Squirrelflight, Tawnypelt, Tigerstar, Onestar, Firestar, Leafpool, Crowfeather, Goldenflower, Flametail, Dawnpelt, Tigerheart, etc.
History:
Ok if you want a way better history see Birdflight's lol
Kit:
Bramblekit was born in a badger den in the middle of a battle along with Birdkit and Hawk-kit. His mother was murdered by the enemy so the three kits were raised by Leafwhisper's best friend, Runningstream. Sparrowtalon, his father, was very involved in raising his kits and was a great father.
Apprentice:
Bramblepaw was part of a small group that called themselves the Tunnelers. There were 4 cats, himself, Blackpaw, Boulderpaw, and Petalpaw. The 4 cats had a secret hideout in a tunnel where Bramblepaw was leader with his deputy Petalpaw. There in the tunnels they trained and explored, becoming some of the best fighters in the clan. The 4 stayed best friends and helped out each other no matter what and they each promised to keep it a secret. When Hawkpaw died in battle Bramblepaw was shocked and horrified and made it his job to protect Birdpaw no matter what.
Warrior:
Even though The Tunnelers stopped meeting everyday, they met every moon in the morning before dawn patrol. Bramblethorn protects his sister even though she insists that she doesn't need protecting. He also proves that he can become the best fighter and sharpens his claws on rocks to prove his strength.
Family:
I'll do this later too
Bramblethorn
Kit:
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Re: Bramblethorn
by Auburnflare November 11th 2012, 02:02
Whoa you have cool pictures! That's awesome :DD
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Re: Bramblethorn
by Frost November 11th 2012, 02:43
You spelled quiet wrongly twice 
Not bad for a start, maybe more elaboration on some parts. Can't wait to see your history and family. Gonna have a relationship chart?
Not bad for a start, maybe more elaboration on some parts. Can't wait to see your history and family. Gonna have a relationship chart?
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Re: Bramblethorn
by Lilacstar November 11th 2012, 10:12
Man, this is awesome! 8D
So you are Birdflight's Brother? Awesome!
I cannot wait for the history!
So are you going to be in Windclan because of Birdflight or no..? :O
But anyways, Welcome! ;D
So you are Birdflight's Brother? Awesome!
I cannot wait for the history!
So are you going to be in Windclan because of Birdflight or no..? :O
But anyways, Welcome! ;D
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Re: Bramblethorn
by Thin Air November 11th 2012, 19:31
Just a heads up, but your AP (attack power) defines how good you are in battle. My attack power is 9000, Birdflight's is 24,000, and so on.
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Re: Bramblethorn
by Caraway November 11th 2012, 20:34
it's a great start 
there were some grammar mistakes and strange wording, but the details are there and they're good. that's a nice shade of green :O i liked your pictures too
i'd suggest trying out a variety of sentence starters, especially for something like your description, since it's hard to mix up words. Join short sentences together and try not to repeat details
there were some grammar mistakes and strange wording, but the details are there and they're good. that's a nice shade of green :O i liked your pictures too i'd suggest trying out a variety of sentence starters, especially for something like your description, since it's hard to mix up words. Join short sentences together and try not to repeat details
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Re: Bramblethorn
by Bramblethorn November 11th 2012, 21:24
To Thin Air: Cool! I guess I'll have to start getting some AP to beat Birdflight
Also to Cheesestar, thank you and I'll work on it. I'll edit my topic now
Also to Cheesestar, thank you and I'll work on it. I'll edit my topic now
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