Wraith

by Wraith October 5th 2012, 18:18

Cat Name:Wraith
Gender:female
Age:15 moons
Appearance: grayish-black with white muzzle and contrasting white streaks(see profile pic), green eyes. Sleek, shiny, soft fur :3
Personality:Friendly and quite docile but is scarily unpredictable when agitated. Mostly likes to be alone, but makes deep friendships with the few cats she likes. Very easygoing and laid back.
Special Traits:Is a good swimmer and hunter
Weaknesses:Has a phobia of snakes; will mistake turtles and dead river plants as such xD
Family:dunno..
History/Origins:somewhere in the forest, next to a river

TO BE CONTINUED~

by **Caraway** October 5th 2012, 18:36

I like your description Razz

Highlghting was a good word to use, though a synonym could be "contrasting". Your personality is also very detailed.

I'd suggest expanding on your history, incorporating how you got to RiverClan and things your cat went through earlier. Maybe she started as a rogue or a kittypet :O Also, you should use a space after a colon so it looks like:
Weaknesses: Has a phobia of snakes

Things you can add would be favourite warriors character, favourite prey, hobbies, etc. Take a look at other peoples' to get ideas Smile

by **Frost** October 5th 2012, 20:50

Amyyyy, not bad for a start. You could refer to my character sheet for a guide!
Its in my signature! xD

But if you can't find it, its here

by Wraith October 5th 2012, 20:57

Thanks for all the suggestions cheesestar! :3 I'll use your advice and hopefully make mine as awesome as the others I've seen here. Phantom: thank you, yeah I'll certainly take a look! ^^