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Post by Crimsonpaw March 26th 2015, 18:42

Cat Name: Crimsonpaw
Gender: Tom
Age: 6 moons
Clan: Skyclan
Rank: apprentice
Favorite Warriors Characters: Spottedleaf CInderheart, Thornclaw, Whitestorm
Appearance: an unusually red tom with white paws and bright icyblue eys
Personality: He is curious and mischevious and always willing to explore and try new things.
Special Traits: He good at hiding. His attack power 15000 but he willing to improve as his training goes along.
Weaknesses: He is stubborn
Family/history: He has a brother named Pinepaw who has reddish brown fur and amber eyes. His mother died not long after he and his brother where born because of infection in wounds got from battle. His father lives in the warrior den and does his best to protect his clan like he suppose to. Crimsonpaw and his brother were born in the middle of leafbare. (Will be edit maybe when hes older). He is full clan.
other: Needs mentor

sorry if this is messed up any its my first one on here.


Last edited by Spottedleaf101 on March 29th 2015, 17:22; edited 1 time in total
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Post by Sunstar March 26th 2015, 21:47

Welll.... It's pretty good, I guess. Don't take offense to this or anything, but I think this can be a bit more detailed, don't you think? You can look at a few examples of some other character sheets if you haven't already. And maybe you can bold some parts too, and make it stand out? You could also add a few extra things, like attack power, or something.
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Post by Crimsonpaw March 26th 2015, 22:55

What is attack power though? the reason i didnt put as much because he s a apprentice and some stuff could develop later in his trainign
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Post by Scarlett March 27th 2015, 10:29

Attack power is our way of measuring the power of a character in roleplays. If there is ever a fight between the characters in the role play we use the attack power to judge who would win the fight. So like for example if you were to get in a fight in the rp with Sunburn, her attack power is 70,000 while yours is 15,000 so Sunburn would win the fight.
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Post by Crimsonpaw March 29th 2015, 17:23

I addded attack power
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