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Post by Legendflower on June 10th 2012, 20:42

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The white she-kit and her brother, Jakob, climbed onto a tree, wondering what all the noise was about. No one was in the Stone Cave, all of the room's empty. The she-kit's bright blue eyes narrowed into slits and she dug her razor sharp claws into the branch as she saw the vicious battle erupting around the kingdom. Jakob's chocolate brown fur was bristling, and his mouth agape as his golden eyes rested on the enemy's. She saw her mother attack one of the enemy's, and, with one scratch, the cat bursted. Her bright blue eyes glowed with confusion as she saw the cat shatter, as if it was glass. "What could they be?" She asked her brother with her accented voice. He shook his head, "I... don't know..." He answered, his voice also thick with an accent. Suddenly, the she-kit felt the tree shaking, and saw a pebble "jumping" up and down as the ground beneath them shook. She saw the glass cats riding horses, heading towards them. Her mother was gaining ground, racing ahead of them, due to years of experience with battles. Jakob jumped off, right next to their mom, his paws thundering as he ran as quickly as he could. Snowy tried to jump off, but her fear grasped her, and she dug her claws deeper into the branch. "Come on!" Jakob yelled, running back towards the tree. She shook her head, and her mother grabbed him by his scruff, and climbed onto a copper horse, now going even faster. She clawed a glass cat as he tried to grab her and take her to what she hoped wasn't the prison. Surprisingly enough, the cat didn't shatter, and she saw blood oozing from the scratch, and black fur on her claws. He threw her into a cage, baring his teeth instead of saying anything. She felt hay under her... but not the hay that was used for their Circle's. It was matted with mold and dirt, which she didn't like. She pushed that to the front, and curled up in a ball in the back. The tile underneath was freezing cold, but she didn't mind. The fear of what was going to happen was even chillier. She saw a creamish she-cat with beautiful hazel blue eyes walk over to the cage. She was a very beautiful cat, but Snowy could sense an evil that she was trying to veil. "We'll get you out of here," She winked, and then dashed ahead of all the other cats. Snowy didn't remember anything after that. She just remembered waking up in a dirty, scary place.. all by herself. There were other cats, of course, but most of them didn't want to talk, or just laid there limply, never moving, never talking...

Significant characters:
Jakob
The queen (You can name her! Wink )
The queen's brother (you can name him! Wink )
Her mother (You can name her! Wink )

OR... you can make up your own character!
Name: (Make it like Jakob, or Erika, etc.)
Description: (Hunters, usually have a dark pelt or brown. Royalty, usually light. Prisoners, any color.)
Position: (Hunter/Huntress. Royalty. Prisoners.)
Good or Bad: (Royalty is bad. Wink )

ROYALTY:
Velika, the Queen. (Phoenixwing/Brightstar)
Wind, Queen's brother. (Thunderclaw)
Crystal (Fabfur)
Danielle, aka Dani. (Ivystar)
Aisylnn, Snowy's mother (Ivystar)

HUNTERS/HUNTRESSES:
Drake, hunter. (Phoenixwing/Brightstar)
Patchy, AKA Chi, Huntress. (Cheesestar)
Diana, Huntress. (Maplestream)
Tike, Hunter (Thunderclaw)
Amin, Hunter (Fabfur)

PRISONERS:
Snowy, female. (Gingerblaze)
Lynk, male. (Thunderclaw)
Nick, male. (Fabfur)
Swift, male. (CheeseStar)

NOTE: Prisoners are allies. Some hunters(or huntresses) may be allies with the prisoners, but please, not all. Eventually, they will rebel against the royalty.
If you don't understand anything, feel free to ask! Wink Thank you for reading, and hopefully joining! Wave


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Re: Innocence

Post by Thunderclaw on June 12th 2012, 12:22

Wind is queens brother... Cat Smile
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Re: Innocence

Post by Legendflower on June 12th 2012, 12:44

Snowy woke up on the uncomfortable Circle made of hay bed, and stretched her aching bones. She got up, and jumped onto the window. She surveyed her surroundings carefully. There was a rushing sea, with silver pointy stones sticking out, to make sure the prisoner's didn't try to leave. Every once in a while, Snowy would hear a scream, then a crash and splatter. Some prisoners committed suicide.. She shook her head, and mewed like she did when she was a kit. A dove that she named Grace flew over, and landed next to her. Grace started to peck at her matted with dirt pelt. Snowy didn't care what she looked like, but Grace apparently did; she groomed her fur every morning. With that, Grace flew away as quickly as she could. Snowy pulled a few pieces of hay from her Circle, and started to rub it together with her paws. Then she started to breathe on them, and repeated this cycle until a small flame started to flicker on the hay. She threw into the fireplace, and continued breathing on it until it became a full blown fire, controlled, of course. She curled up in a ball, purring as the warmness enveloped the whole prison. Then Grace flew in, and dropped a medium sized crab next to Snowy, and she gobbled it up gratefully. Snowy curled up in a ball again, and Grace sat next to her.
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Re: Innocence

Post by Thunderclaw on June 12th 2012, 13:10

So we are RPing now?
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Re: Innocence

Post by Legendflower on June 12th 2012, 13:17

Yes, which is why I made an RP post. Razz
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Re: Innocence

Post by Phoenixwing on June 12th 2012, 13:58

Velika lay on her Throne, head resting on her paws, a purr rolling out from her slender body. Her stomach was full, and she was happy. Her hunters were reporting back good news, and she had just sent Drake on a mission to kill a certain cat that was rumored to be starting uprisings. It was probably just nonsense, but better safe than sorry....

Drake padded through the forest, his body a ghostly wraith under the sun-dappled forest. An owl hooted somewhere; he paid it no mind. The branches were too thickly overlapped here for any kind of bird-predatory to swoop in and effectively lift off a cat or a mouse. He was close to his own prey now, very close. He could smell it in the air, feel it in the prickle of his titanium tabby fur. And there! The scrawny ginger tom, dozing in the shade of a poplar tree. Drake's lip curled back into a sneer. This was easy, almost too easy. His three-inch claws unsheathed and slid into the soft earth. He breathed in, and out, his green-blue eyes narrowed, fixed at the base of the ginger's head. And Drake leaped. His powerful hindlegs sent him hurtling over the forest floor, and landing directly on top of the ginger cat. His large paws were crashing down on the head, cracking the tom's neck, before the victim could even cry out. With exaggerated care, Drake stepped away from the dead cat. "It is done."
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Re: Innocence

Post by Noxe on June 12th 2012, 14:08

Diana stepped out of the undergrowth, making no sound as she slithered next to Drake. "Nice," she whispered. "Such a fool... I'm sure our dear queen will love this kill. You didn't hurt him before you killed him? Didn't torture him, didn't let him bleed and beg for mercy? Because that's always the fun part." She stared at the skinny broken body, with a neck bent at an impossible angle. "Let's take this back to Her Majesty."

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Re: Innocence

Post by Phoenixwing on June 12th 2012, 14:22

Drake flicked his ears, unperturbed by Diana's sudden appearance. "Who cares about the 'fun part'?" he growled, his voice deep and rough. "His cries would alert every single cat within a mile radius, and make my work even harder." He swung his head around to stare at the Huntress, eyes chilling. "If you had any sense or skill, you'd be able to kill your victim before they even know what's happening, without alerting any of its friends nearby. Do it without a sound, and leave without a trace. Only rogues and beserkers torture their prey before they strike the killing blow." Snorting in disgust, Drake turned and away and padded into the undergrowth. He made no attempt to be quiet, yet his paws made minimal sound on the forest floor. The target's death had been quick, so his mission had been relatively easy. And what in the name of Seven Volcanoes (idk) was Diana thinking when she thought it about bringing the carcass back? Drake flattened his ears again. Did she expect Queen Velika to stuff it and hang it on the wall?
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Re: Innocence

Post by Noxe on June 12th 2012, 14:28

~ok I really have no idea what's happening or what I'm supposed to do... *lost*~

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Re: Innocence

Post by Phoenixwing on June 12th 2012, 14:49

~Do something... Go back to the castle, go on a mission and kill some cats and make up a reason. Razz~
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Re: Innocence

Post by Noxe on June 12th 2012, 17:12

"Fine," Diana replied in a chilly voice. "Be that way." She trotted back through the ferns in the direction of the castle. She went in and walked to the throne room. "Queen Velika? Your Majesty?" she meowed. "Drake killed the cat. Is there anything you want me to do?"

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Re: Innocence

Post by Phoenixwing on June 12th 2012, 18:04

Velika raised her head. For such a small, slender she-cat, her persuasiveness was so powerful, it was like magic, and her personality was cunning, ruthless, and cruel. Her glittering, expressionless pale gray eyes stared at Diana. "Drake should be here to report his mission himself. Why are you doing it for him?" As she spoke, the large Hunter strode through the wide, double doors. "Mission completed," he said, ignoring Diana. "So it would seem," the Queen replied, cutting him off. "Your fellow Huntress over here decided to report back for you.... But anyways, Diana. Some cat in the castle may be plotting to release some prisoners. My spies have told me thus... Go to Bregan, the young Hunter that--I hope you know him, because I will not explain further--but you must kill him, and quickly too. Find out any other information that you can." She flicked her tail, dismissing the two Hunters. Drake flicked a narrowed gaze at Diana before dipping his head and exited the Throne room.
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Re: Innocence

Post by Thunderclaw on June 13th 2012, 08:43

As Wind stepped into the throne room, he saw drake exiting."Another kill,i bet,"he said to himself then stepped up to the queen."Vel,Having any problems today i might handle?"he asked.


Her brother is the only one(besides the king)that doesn't have to call her"your majesty." Razz
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Re: Innocence

Post by Phoenixwing on June 13th 2012, 09:33

~Please make your posts a little longer and more detailed. Thanks. Wink~

Velika eyed her brother with her pale eyes. "I don't think so," she meowed, stretching. "My Hunters are working quickly and effectively... There will be no need." Pausing in mid-stretch, the Queen froze, eyes narrowed, her tail-tip twitching. "Or rather, you could go and scout the Garden perimeter. Now that's something I haven't had done for awhile." She gathered her legs beneath her body and sniffed. "Of course, there's nothing much going around there. Drake! Wait, Diana." A few moments later, Drake reappeared in the room, looking at the Queen expectantly. "I want you two... After you, Diana, have killed Bregan of course, to go the prison, and check them."
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Re: Innocence

Post by Legendflower on June 14th 2012, 12:01

Name: Katelyn
Description: Off-white she-cat with shining teal eyes. She has black tufts on her ears, and a black tail tip. She is a slender, skinny, cat. Katelyn is very agile and nimble. She is very good on her feet, and good at climbing. Katelyn's supposed to be royalty, but she doesn't want to be evil, so she's a very high ranked Huntress.
Position: Huntress
Good or Bad: Definitely good
NOTE: Drake is the highest ranked Hunter
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Re: Innocence

Post by Thunderclaw on June 15th 2012, 07:37

"Right."he said and off he went.He checked every square inch,but found nothing,except dirt
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Post by Legendflower on June 15th 2012, 13:32

Katelyn dragged back into the Throne Room a rabbit about twice as big as her. She set it down in a bowl, and growled, "Velika, your food is here." Then she left the room, tail high. Katelyn decided to go on a walk out in the woods, before someone could say Velika wants her. She ran as quickly as she could, her muscles flexing as she ran. Her teal eyes glittered as she looked at all the wildlife around her. The nimble she-cat jumped onto a tree, looking down at the beauty. A few hummingbirds were getting the pollen from a pretty white flower, and then there was some kind no cat had ever seen, only heard singing above all the noise. They have beautiful voices, so Katelyn called them Songbirds.
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Re: Innocence

Post by Pandora on June 16th 2012, 09:15

~ can someone take me off this please >.>~
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Re: Innocence

Post by Legendflower on June 16th 2012, 12:34

You didn't have to put the ">.>"; that's rude. But yes, I'll take your name off.
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Post by Pandora on June 16th 2012, 13:08

thanks and sorry :/
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Post by Phoenixwing on June 16th 2012, 16:32

Velika flicked her tail as Katelyn brought her her meal. "You're all dismissed," she ordered flatly. "Report back to me, when you're finished. But leave me an hour of peace." Drake grunted assent and padded out of the Throne Room again, paws making a muffled scuffling sound on the polished marble. (Idk) He was pretty hungry himself, and seeing the big, plump rabbit had just made him even hungrier. Snorting inwardly, Drake bounded down the hallway and nosed out of the glass doors and headed out into the forest. The Queen's so small, I bet she can't even eat half of that huge rabbit, he thought crossly, temper soured by his empty stomach. Drake slid deeper into the undergrowth, his dark fur melting into the shadows, as he scented for his quarry. Ptarmigan was his favorite, and he was determined to have a good meal today. Queen Velika must've been edgy today, with the amount of mission he was being sent on. Flicking his ears in slight annoyance, Drake continued deeper into the shadows.
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Re: Innocence

Post by Noxe on June 17th 2012, 13:27

Meanwhile, after hearing her mission, Diana set off, nose in the air for Bregan's scent. She'd met him once, and she decided she didn't like him. The young cat was arrogant (idk) and very independent. She picked up a trail and followed it to where Bregan was walking near the prison. "Hello Bregan," she meowed. After recovering from his initial surprise, Bregan narrowed his eyes. "What do you want?" "Anyone can take a walk in the castle, can't they?" Diana replied cooly. "However, I'm interested. You wish to release the prisoners, don't you?" She ignored the alarm in his eyes. "It's obvious. It can't be a coincidence that you always walk so close to the prison, or that every day a rabbit goes missing from the prey pile (again, idk). But why? Why would you want to release them?"

~Phoenix, can you help RP Bregan?~

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Re: Innocence

Post by Legendflower on June 17th 2012, 23:59

Katelyn licked her chops as she finished off the chaffinch, rolling onto her back as she purred. The she-cat was probably the best Huntress, but she definitely had an attitude to come with it. The off white she-cat's ears pricked as she heard a confrontation. A sly smile appearing on her face, she followed the sound till she saw Diana and Bregan. "Well, well, what do we have here?" She said agitatingly calm, circling the tom as she narrowed her icy blue eyes. Baring her teeth, she spat, "Prisoners? Worthless cats. Who would want to help them? Anyways, I'll leave you on your own, Diana. Just call if you need help." She winked slyly, returning to her foresty area.
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Re: Innocence

Post by Noxe on June 18th 2012, 10:24

Diana winked back. "Oh, I'm sure I can handle this one easily enough." Bregan shivered at her words. Pretending not to notice, Diana told Bregan, "We need to talk. Follow." She led the young tom into the forest so that his blood would not stain the castle. Diana stopped by a palm tree. "I'm interested, Bregan... What would make you want to release the prisoners?"

~Hey Phoenix... Can you help me RP Bregan?~

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Post by Thunderclaw on June 23rd 2012, 17:21

Wind left the throne room and decided he had better hunt. before he had even started hunting,he heard some cats talking,and was astonished by what they were saying."Why would someone want to release those things?"he said to himself.he followed the scent of two of them and,when he saw Bregan with Diana,said,to Bregan,"Release the prisoners?Are you begging for us to kill you? is that what you want?"
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Post by Noxe on June 23rd 2012, 18:50

~Thunderclaw, if you're offended by the following, know that I don't hate you. Diana's just a bloated butthead, lol Razz~

"I... I think they were wrongly imprisoned," Bregan blurted out. "I mean, it-it wasn't like they did anything wrong, right? Anyways, I was p-planning to release them in a quartermoon." The words tumbled out of his mouth as he described the plan. Then his eyes hardened. "But whatever you do to me, it won't help you. There are more of us, and I'm not telling you who." Diana suddenly heard the footsteps behind her and knew it was Wind. Because her senses were keener than Bregan's, she knew Bregan hadn't heard or smelled Wind yet. In a brilliant flash, Diana had an idea. She gasped, "Oh no... HE'S HERE!!!" Bregan instinctively spun around, and as he did so, Diana leapt onto him and killed him with a swift bite to the throat. As the light in his eyes faded, Bregan rasped, "Traitor..." And then he was no more.
Diana grabbed Bregan by the scruff and effortlessly swung his bloody body ito a nearby shrub. She turned to face Wind. "What?" she spat contemptuously. "You know I work for Queen Velika, and Velika only, fleabag. You don't think I can handle this by myself? Well I just did, and you nearly ruined my plot!!!"

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